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I'm very late on parade to this chapter (out for a meal with some work friends last night and then work today - UK time don't forget). @Mrsgnomiehow long was the original version of this chapter before you slowed it down and split it in two? Without seeing the original I think we can safely say that this version is probably better (thanks @Mawgrim for that suggestion). Now I'm looking forward to part 2 of chapter 13 (okay I know it'll be called chapter 14). I'm sure that Jay & Loren will sort things out in their own time. Now it's time to prepare for Aido Potato! Batten down the hatches!!

@chris191070- I can't believe you got sent to the corner! Though I was thinking of posting just the same thing so you saved me from the righteous wrath of @kbois!

Yep I certainly do - as I remember Bobby (actor Patrick Duffy (also The Man From Atlantis) for those who don't know who we're referencing) looked quite hot when he stepped out of that shower; but he had been it for a year!

@kboisis never under the alfluence of incohol!

Nah, Northman won't get any tickets from Ceej or Oshie for Chipper's concert - Northman won't be in to that type of music; he probably likes Opera (not that there's anything wrong with that of course). Great chapter @Carlos Hazday Ozzie's right (of course), CJ definitely needs to read his own book and he will hopefully apologise (eventually) to Peter. Though Peter Pure sounds like that cartoon character from The Wacky Races - Peter Perfect in the Turbo Terriffic!

Thanks @Altimexisfor such a great story. You certainly deserve your rest before you start anything else.

OMG! Yes he is a stunner!!

Yes - I've got a funny feeling that Jenny and/or Trevor never actually made it to Australia and that those postcards are fakes (or sent by person's unknown from Oz). They could well be both in that well! We shall find out in due course. Excellent chapter @Mawgrim

I want to be Jay hugging Loren!

To echo fellow respondents - a great chapter again @Mrsgnomie! Don't think I could cope with 4 times a week, never mind 4 times a day! Really looking forward to the next chapter - hopefully by then @Mrsgnomie& @kboiswill have sorted out their differences!

If the chapter had finished before the last couple of paragraphs I would have said that Sarah was the one who was working for the other side. Dirk is going to be so devastated by this - as well as Ingle. They both worked with her and she managed to hide her true self though with being a telepath that would have made it a whole lot easier. Dirk has lost his mate but I'm sure he and his wolf will recover from that shock. Great chapter @astone2292

That will be Isaac Bell if I'm not mistaken.

Yep I recognised the reference to Clive Cussler's character, Dirk Pitt (senior, as his son is also called Dirk) and his collection of vintage cars (amongst other things - like a bath tub and a train carriage!). I love reading all of Clive's books with his various story arcs that overlap with each other occasionally.

Groin strain? 😁

Hey@astone2292 Great chapter - sounds like a showdown between Stuerm (and his goons) and Tierney is heading our way! I don't think Stuerm will know what's hit him. Now that Fenn has gone to the EC to report all of Stuerm's wrongdoings (including Auditor Powell's malfeasance) lots of things are going to change in Stuerm's (soon to be former) pack area!

No @Carlos Hazdaydon't you listen to @chris191070- I'm really looking forward to those storylines!

Hey @Carlos Hazday For a change I'm able to read this during the day as I'm currently in self-isolation (with my Dad) as we both tested positive for Covid earlier this week. Both of us have an occasional cough but apart from that we're both feeling okay. Hopefully tomorrow and Sunday will bring me two negative lft's so I can go back to work on Monday. Great chapter and I too love the banter between the characters, especially when Liebe joins in with one of her admonitions to either father/grandfather on hearing an adult word from them! The Mexico Incident approaches!

P.S. Love the pictures you've selected for the Story Cover - is that Jay?

Considering how much Alpha @kboishad you tied up working on Spirit Wolves (fantastic story) I'm kind of stunned it only took 7 months! Delighted to see these guys back again and now we get to see the rest of the story we saw pieces of in Boss Nanny (another great story).

So am I!

Thankyou @Carlos Hazdayfor an extra chapter on a relatively calmer day (weather wise) here in the UK. Storm Dudley was a complete pussy-cat compared to Storm Eunice which hit Ireland/UK on Friday before moving on to Belgium/Netherlands/Germany/Poland on Saturday/Sunday - leaving death & destruction in it's wake. Now Storm Franklin is heading our way! Great chapter @Carlos Hazday . Northman is the proverbial jobsworth - he'd have been heading to the bow in The Poseidon Adventure (original version) rather than going upwards to the Engine Room!

If you've never read a shifter world story before then you gotta read this one! Author @kbois draws you into her version of a shifter world where evil things are afoot - wolf pups are going missing and nobody knows where they are! Love (of all kinds) is interspersed with treachery/betrayal, bravery and corruption all present - you just do not know who are your friends or enemies! This is one of those stories where if I had come across it now (on completion) then I would have to read every chapter straight away until I finished them all! P.S. Please read the chapter comments (and join in) as the author @kbois is very active along with her editor @Mrsgnomieand beta reader @Danilo Syrtis. A warning though - you may end up being sent to a corner!

@Danilo Syrtis Re the Charlie Cochet THIRDS series - I've read all of them and they are absolutely fantastic!

As we take a temporary pause from the wonderful world of The Sentinels can I please hear a thunderous round of applause for Alpha @kboison writing such a fantastic story. I am really looking forward to the next installments in this shifter world. Hopefully we will see resolutions to the problems regarding the hybrid pups (and tracking down all the other missing ones) and find out who Elijah is involved with! Lycan/shifter stories are quite possibly my favourite story world here on GA and @kboisshould continue writing in that world.

You are assuming no last minute re-writes or chapter additions!