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2011 - Summer - Walk on the Wild Side Entry

The Midnight Hour - 1. The Midnight Hour

 

 

 

 

It was the midnight hour here in the wood not a human sound to be heard,

I held my breath, listening to the noise of the wild.

Looking up to the black sky filled with stars, a bat catches my eye,

Rustling all around me, from the tops of the trees blowing in the breeze.

A little lower to a branch where an owl hooted softly,

Even lower to the roots thrust deeply into the soil.

 

Looking one way then the other as night creatures came to life,

The sound of snuffling as a badger rooted for grubs,

A female fox, chastising her young to behave, but always ignored,

Watching a spider crawl over my hand “hello there,” I smiled,

A tiny shrew its tapering nose twitching as it smelled the air,

The scent of wild garlic was filling my nose pungent but sweet.

 

Then to the ground under me, soft and warm, heated by my skin,

How much wilder could anyone ever possibly be?

Rolling onto my back, and laughing at the wonders around me,

Life didn’t get any better than this nothing could surpass.

Why was I so happy? I was completely naked you see?



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2011 - Summer - Walk on the Wild Side Entry
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Lugh

naked and covered in bug?

Not my idea of a good time,

But if you kije it,,,,

 

enjoy!

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Mark92
On 06/10/2011 02:31 PM, Lugh said:
naked and covered in bug?

Not my idea of a good time,

But if you kije it,,,,

 

enjoy!

LOL Lugh I do not get covered in bugs, despite what you might think they are more scared of you. Thanks for the review :)
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comicfan

So a peaceful night out. The wonders of nature. You snuggled up in you den and naked to boot. Well Mark never took you for a new Pan. Hmm. You have a bit of a wild side there.

 

:great:

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Mark92
On 06/12/2011 02:19 PM, comicfan said:
So a peaceful night out. The wonders of nature. You snuggled up in you den and naked to boot. Well Mark never took you for a new Pan. Hmm. You have a bit of a wild side there.

 

:great:

Thankyou Comic The wood feels more like home than this house does.But thats another story. Thanks again. :)
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On 06/12/2011 04:02 PM, Foster said:
Your own wonderful world, reflected in word. Enjoyed.
Thankyou Bugs :)Every word, every creature and every feeling was true. My favourite place in the world. Thank you again
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On 06/12/2011 07:59 PM, Frostina said:
:P

Nice fun! :P One with nature! :D

Hey frosty :) It always is great fun, and I really do it and often. Every word of it is true. Thank you so much...love you frost :)
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Nephylim

I can sooo see that. I would love to do that but knowing me I would get a twig up the arse and covered with bat poo. A beautiful, peaceful, gentle piece of writing. Sweet.

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Dannsar

I canna be faffed with poetry. But for some reason, I think its the lack of pretension, I could read urs all the day long. It just, I dunno ... soothes and calms are the wrong words ... its more that they even out the corrugations of life somehow. Thats the mental feeling I get ... thats syneasthesia for you! But, thank you! xx

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Mark92
On 06/13/2011 02:58 AM, jian_sierra said:
Ooh I love the use of words. Thanks for sharing :hug:
Thanks Jian, It's always a very special time. Thankyou so much. :)
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On 06/13/2011 05:42 AM, Nephylim said:
I can sooo see that. I would love to do that but knowing me I would get a twig up the arse and covered with bat poo. A beautiful, peaceful, gentle piece of writing. Sweet.
Nephy! Hahahaha how descriptive and vivid an image that is.LOL It isn't hard to write what you see and feel. Thankyou so much and glad you enjoyed it. :)
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On 06/13/2011 09:09 AM, Dannsar said:
I canna be faffed with poetry. But for some reason, I think its the lack of pretension, I could read urs all the day long. It just, I dunno ... soothes and calms are the wrong words ... its more that they even out the corrugations of life somehow. Thats the mental feeling I get ... thats syneasthesia for you! But, thank you! xx
Hi Dannsar, I write what I see and feel. Glad you enjoyed it and many thanks for review :)
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On 06/14/2011 03:25 AM, Kev de Cauchery said:
It's cute. Vivid and fun. Great read!
Hey Many thanks Kevin. Glad you liked it. :)
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Cia
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I'm going to stick with enjoying the animal visualizations. They were great, could definitely feel the warmth and the quiet and the nature all around, I've had summer nights like that. Memory supplied the warm soil smell, leaves, the musk of tree bark. That's as far as I'm going in visualizing though... no naked peoples allowed!! ;) I'm not great at getting poetry but your imagery was quite well done.

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On 06/15/2011 12:36 AM, Cia said:
I'm going to stick with enjoying the animal visualizations. They were great, could definitely feel the warmth and the quiet and the nature all around, I've had summer nights like that. Memory supplied the warm soil smell, leaves, the musk of tree bark. That's as far as I'm going in visualizing though... no naked peoples allowed!! ;) I'm not great at getting poetry but your imagery was quite well done.
Thank you Cia, praise indeed :) glad you got it. Thanks again.:)
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On 06/15/2011 02:15 AM, Prince Duchess said:
This was a cute lil poem. Your definitely in touch with nature!
Hey Prince and thankyou, I cant imagine life without it. Glad you liked it and thanks again :)
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CassieQ

Very awesome! Vivid and powerful. I love nature and the wilderness and the way it was presented here was very sensual and sexy. Excellent :)

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On 04/01/2012 11:35 AM, CassieQ said:
Very awesome! Vivid and powerful. I love nature and the wilderness and the way it was presented here was very sensual and sexy. Excellent :)
Thank you Cassiekins :wub::hug: Miss you xxx
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FSELL

Loved it, got to be comfy with who we are, and what we’ve got. Nothing better too, in some long soft grass in the summer sunshine, with a gentile warm breeze blowing, taking it all in, and not giveing a F, loved you’re story thanks John 

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