The Sock Drawer - 15. From the speakers the sensual sound

Hey Dr. O .. oh I don't know I think you should put your poem down. I liked it very much. It's simple, but there's nothing wrong with simple if it's done well and this was. Perfectly enjoyable and sweet.

Neither old, nor juvenile. I'd call it highly charged, sensuous, and evocative. Simple is okay by me. I like simple.

On 01/06/2016 08:41 AM, Parker Owens said:

Neither old, nor juvenile. I'd call it highly charged, sensuous, and evocative. Simple is okay by me. I like simple.

It's a kind of "rhyme or die!" text is what I meant. I'm glad you found it all those other brilliant things anyway.

On 01/06/2016 07:45 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hey Dr. O .. oh I don't know I think you should put your poem down. I liked it very much. It's simple, but there's nothing wrong with simple if it's done well and this was. Perfectly enjoyable and sweet.

Oh, I'm not putting it down. If I found it really horrible I wouldn't have put it up here. I'm happy you liked it, and thank you for the feedback!

I too found it very sensual and beautiful. IMO, the short length of the lines heightens the anticipation, and intensifies an experience for the reader that's close to voyeurism. I think it works very well!

On 01/06/2016 11:49 AM, AC Benus said:

I too found it very sensual and beautiful. IMO, the short length of the lines heightens the anticipation, and intensifies an experience for the reader that's close to voyeurism. I think it works very well!

Oh!

Thank you.

Plain and simple... I like it. It culminates in a beautifully expressed payoff... and it also evokes a time period... well done... cheers... Gary....

On 01/07/2016 05:40 AM, Headstall said:

Plain and simple... I like it. It culminates in a beautifully expressed payoff... and it also evokes a time period... well done... cheers... Gary....

I'm glad it works. Thank you very much for the review.

- Oger

Definitely not juvenile, Doc.

Then ending brought me to tears, so it's a definite A+++++++ in my book.

I loved it!

On 01/10/2016 04:46 AM, Lisa said:

Definitely not juvenile, Doc.

 

Then ending brought me to tears, so it's a definite A+++++++ in my book.

 

I loved it!

Take this great basket packed with seven fresh Thanks!