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Drew's Prompts - 3. Mac's Task

@MacGreg gave me an assignment yesterday: find a song that really moves me, and dance to it- focusing on what the music is doing to me. Then, write my experience down.

My mind is a scattered mess,

My body moves in awkwardness.

But then, my ears latch on

To the notes and beats of the song.

 

My mind is in the here and now,

My body- rhythm found.

My mind and body are now in sync,

The song and dance, their link.

 

Both were once erratic,

But now, they're almost... erotic.

Copyright © 2017 Drew Espinosa; All Rights Reserved.
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2 minutes ago, Puppilull said:

Again, I get stuck on mindfulness. I love dancing and your poem beautifully links it to one of the other things I enjoy... Ehum... But I think you're on to something here. That letting go, the surrender to something else and letting it guide you even if you start out feeling awkward and uncomfortable. I so enjoy surrender... Good job, Drew!

Thank you Puppi! :D Trying to find the words was surprisingly difficult, but it was oh so satisfying to finally complete it!

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3 hours ago, MacGreg said:

Great job on this, drew. you listened not only to the music, but to your body and mind, as well. you allowed the rhythm to get inside of you, and you focused on the sensations it produced and how those affected you, and you formed it into this great poem - despite your struggles with it. Concentration works. Now, I trust that you'll dance more often.  

Thank you, Sir! And yes, I'll dance more often.

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