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There's Always Room in My Heart, Charlie Boone! - 1. Chapter 1

This small story presupposes that you are at least a little familiar with the world that Charlie and Kippy live in. If you're not, you may not get the magic.

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Kippy Lawson sat in his boyfriend's bedroom and watched as Charlie Boone put the finishing touches on the painting. The small canvas was covered in swirls and patterns of many colors, but didn't seem to resemble any one thing that Kippy could put a name to. It had started out looking like a thunder cloud, dark and moody, until Charlie had added some brighter, more cheerful colors; and then it had looked kind of like a tornado that had attacked an unsuspecting paint store on some barren Kansas plain.

Kippy could almost see things that made sense - patterns that seemed to taunt his eyes and suggest this or that; but then Charlie would swipe the brush over them and blend them back into the general confusion. About the time that Charlie stepped back from the makeshift easel and smiled, Kippy had decided that painting pictures was one thing that his boyfriend was not ever going to be particularly good at. This assignment was going to be a bust, for sure.

"There," Charlie said, and glanced proudly over his shoulder at Kip. "What do you think?"

Kippy pushed himself off the edge of the bed and walked up to the painting, while Charlie watched him expectantly.

"You want my honest opinion?" Kippy asked.

Charlie sighed, and laid the brush he'd been using into the old shoebox he'd adapted into a makeshift palette. "If it's not too much trouble." But it was plain from Charlie's expression that he could already see that Kippy didn't like the painting.

Kippy smiled, and cupped his chin in a thumb and forefinger, and gazed at the painting again. "The assignment was to show what you feel inside you." Kippy looked pointedly at the painting. "What's in your heart, Ms. Ballenger said."

Charlie nodded. "This is what's in my heart, Kip."

Kippy's eyebrows went up. "Really?"

"Yes. You don't see anything there? Nothing at all?"

The emphasis his boyfriend had placed on the last question caused Kippy to blink, and to reexamine the painting once again. He let his eyes return to the maelstrom of colors, searching for something of meaning there. But no matter where he looked, all he could see was chaos.

His confusion must have showed. Charlie smiled at him then, and leaned over and gently kissed his cheek. "You're looking too hard, Kip. Relax."

Charlie put his arm around Kippy's shoulder's and gave him a fond squeeze, and they stood together and looked again.

Kippy took a breath and let it out, and leaned against Charlie, and commanded his eyes to stop looking for something, and just kind of take in everything. The painting blurred a little, and seemed almost to flow before his eyes. He blinked, and noted for the first time that there were little flashes of color here and there in the mix, almost like sparkles, that were kind of cheerful and comforting, almost like stars in the night sky. And...and the way that green spongy blob above the brown stroke looked like treetops near Myer's Hill, waving in the summer breeze...that was also interesting. And up to the right, there was a black blotch, totally black, except for a tiny brown crescent that seemed to hang unsupported in the middle of all that darkness. Kippy was immediately reminded of Engris, the artificial world that hung in the equal blackness of the Cooee, far off in space and no-time, visited twice now in their travels with Mike and Pacha'ka.

At the bottom of the painting were four upright brush strokes, forked at the bottom, that now resembled four people walking, and Kippy was immediately put in mind of himself, Charlie, Ricky Travers, and Adrian Whitaker - four friends, who had made it a habit of going places together. Doing things together. Being together.

Four friends, walking together across the bottom of the painting, while mysterious things happened above them.

And there, over on the other side...was that a figure in red...leading a horse? Nicholaas and Kirka? And that smaller figure beside the one in red...no, it was three smaller figures! Was that Max, and Frit and Pip, their elven friends? And those many dots of light, all different colors? They looked like the warm Christmas lights of Twombly!

Suddenly, things began to leap out at Kippy, from everywhere within the mass of colors. People they knew, places they had been, things that he and Charlie had wished together, and dreamed together, and done together. Moments in time, experiences shared. Memories created, and now fondly stored away. Everything that meant anything to both of them, and to the people they loved, everywhere in the universe, and beyond.

"Oh...Charlie," Kippy breathed, seeing it all now. "It's...it's beautiful." He turned into Charlie's arms, and they closed their eyes and held onto each other. The room was quiet save for Charlie's alarm clock ticking on his nightstand, and the lightest of February breezes, playing in the cold sunshine outside the bedroom window. Kippy could feel his own heart beating - and then the faint pulse of Charlie's, chest against chest, close and dear.

He pulled back, and smiled into Charlie's eyes. "I was going to say that I didn't see anything. That it didn't make sense to me. And then, it just did."

"I know." Charlie nodded. "I used some magic, Kip. One of the wishes that Kiley and Kiri gave to us." He turned and looked at the painting. "I painted that with magic, and only someone that shares that magic can see what is there."

Kippy nodded. "I didn't see anything at first. It just looked really confused to me."

"Uh huh. That's because you were only seeing it with your eyes." Charlie sighed. "You have to look at this painting with your heart to see what is really there."

Kippy shook his head. "You can't turn this in for your art project at school, Charlie." He looked again at the painting, and smiled. "It's too...too special for that."

Charlie leaned over and kissed Kippy again. "I didn't do this painting for school, Kip. I did it for you."

Kippy gasped, and turned back to gaze into his boyfriend's eyes. "For me?"

Charlie smiled at the expression on his boyfriend's face. "Yup. From my heart, to yours. Happy Valentine's Day, Kip."

Kippy squeezed his eyes closed a moment, and then laughed. "Oh, Charlie. You say the nicest things."

"I love you, Kip."

"Oh, Charlie, I love you, too."

They stood together and looked at the painting some more, remembering together, and smiling.

 

 

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This is the shortest Charlie Boone tale I'll probably ever write.

But, sometimes, a few short words are all it takes.

Copyright © 2019 Geron Kees; All Rights Reserved.
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Just as I was thinking of you as an example of an author who was notorious for extraordinarily long postings for a reader complaining about short chapters! It’s almost as if Skwish caused you to write this just to confound my expectations. But now that we have this appetizer, how soon before you post the entree? March 17th? March 21? April 1st? April 22? May 1st? May 5th? May 22?  ;–)

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5 hours ago, mfa607 said:

Wow..as they say, short but oh so sweet!  Thank you so much, as always!!

Thank you, too. Charlie and Kip are one of my favorite story lines, and I usually get very wrapped up in writing their tales. I just didn't want to lose my thread on my other story this time.

 

There are plenty of holidays left in the year. These guys will be back.:)

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1 hour ago, Geron Kees said:

Hi, DQ!

 

Old Windbag me, huh? Haha. That sounds like a particularly cheap brand of country whiskey!

There was a complaint about how short the chapters were in Ronyx’s first story (even though there was a warning about the brevity in the first chapter). After reminding him that authors have feelings too, I mentioned that I could refer him to an author who has suffered from complaints about the extraordinary length of his postings (including mine). And then the very next day I find this story!  ;–)

 

1 hour ago, Geron Kees said:

Like I said, many more holidays left in the year.

4 hours ago, droughtquake said:

Sooooooooo, do any of those dates look enticing? I could come up with more holidays, including others that are less well-known! I’m certain Charlie and Kip are willing to be very inclusive.  ;–)

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Way too short, but it's still got the ol' magic skwish.

Sadly, it's spread way past the edge of the browser, and it's too hard to like anything  comment-wise.  The front page was fine, it was only when the chapter itself came up that this happened, and even the site parts are way off kilter.  :( 

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26 minutes ago, ColumbusGuy said:

Sadly, it's spread way past the edge of the browser, and it's too hard to like anything  comment-wise.  The front page was fine, it was only when the chapter itself came up that this happened, and even the site parts are way off kilter.  :( 

Whatever is causing your problem didn’t affect me this time. It’s clearly an interaction between the formatting from the software used to create the text and the site software that isn’t properly interpreting things. Unlike my issue with Ivor’s formatting, I was able to successfully see this story in Reader View mode in Safari.  ;–)

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8 hours ago, droughtquake said:

Sooooooooo, do any of those dates look enticing? I could come up with more holidays, including others that are less well-known! I’m certain Charlie and Kip are willing to be very inclusive.  ;–)

 

When I see "holidays" and May 1 I think of Beltane.  🙂

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11 hours ago, droughtquake said:

There was a complaint about how short the chapters were in Ronyx’s first story (even though there was a warning about the brevity in the first chapter). After reminding him that authors have feelings too, I mentioned that I could refer him to an author who has suffered from complaints about the extraordinary length of his postings (including mine). And then the very next day I find this story!  ;–)

 

Sooooooooo, do any of those dates look enticing? I could come up with more holidays, including others that are less well-known! I’m certain Charlie and Kip are willing to be very inclusive.  ;–)

They're all just too close right now. Same problem as with Valentine's Day. I need to complete the other story first.

 

And you missed March 7th - Emperor Penguin Appreciation Day. :)

 

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10 hours ago, chris191070 said:

A lovely visit from Kip and Charlie, look forward to there next adventure.

Thank you!

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8 hours ago, Ivor Slipper said:

It may have been short, but it was oh so magically good - even if we didn't get a glimpse of what Adrian & Ricky are up to. :)

Hmm. I may have missed a great opportunity. After completing this short tale, I should have done an equally short one on Valentine's Day for Rick and Adrian.

 

Well, there's always Emperor Penguin Appreciation Day! :)

 

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7 hours ago, ColumbusGuy said:

Way too short, but it's still got the ol' magic skwish.

Sadly, it's spread way past the edge of the browser, and it's too hard to like anything  comment-wise.  The front page was fine, it was only when the chapter itself came up that this happened, and even the site parts are way off kilter.  :( 

Sorry that the skwish oozed out the side of the screen!

 

That has to be your browser, as I tried looking at this in both Opera and FireFox, and it looks fine. You've had this difficulty before, right? Are you sure your zoom is not really ZOOMED?

 

Go back to the page and try holding down the Ctrl key and using your mousewheel (draw it towards you) to zoom out. The reverse zooms in. Ctrl and +, and Ctrl and - both do the same thing. Ctrl and zero reset the default zoom.

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7 hours ago, droughtquake said:

Whatever is causing your problem didn’t affect me this time. It’s clearly an interaction between the formatting from the software used to create the text and the site software that isn’t properly interpreting things. Unlike my issue with Ivor’s formatting, I was able to successfully see this story in Reader View mode in Safari.  ;–)

Actually...this could conceivably be my fault. I depend on the viewer here to be smart enough to know how to interpret the HTML from my BlueGriffon. I usually just copy the text from the editor and paste it here. I was in a hurry this time and simply displayed the file in FireFox and copied it in browser mode and pasted it here. It displays fine in both of my browsers, but it could conceivably introduce a problem  for some, depending on browser settings. I won't do that again in the future.

 

Anyone else that has display problems, let me know, and I'll see about replacing the file.

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I set the zoom back to zero and the text still runs over the edge of the browser, which is almost full screen.  I have the text thing in th five buttons above set to 3/4, and even set lower, it doesn't help much.  I'd wager what droughtquake mentioned and your reply is what went wrong because the story's 'cover' page is perfect as are all other things I look at on site with my usual settings, and it's only some of your chapters that do this thing to site's appearance.  I use Word 2013 which uses some html things to format, and I just copy the text  and paste it into the software here...never had a problem.  For Nifty, I do tend to send them the files as htm files with the MS coding removed, and it shows up there when they post it that way...even the foreign letters the Danish bits sometimes use.  :)

I used to use the same copy and paste routine when i was trying other writing things like OpenOffice and LibreOffice and googledocs, and those looked fine too.

For my browsers, I don't know enough to go beyond the basic settings like default fonts and sizes, and letting it choose colors, and those are things I kept consistent from browser to browser.

Not complaining since Kippy and Charlie are awesome in any 'setting'....  :)

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1 hour ago, ColumbusGuy said:

I set the zoom back to zero and the text still runs over the edge of the browser, which is almost full screen.  I have the text thing in th five buttons above set to 3/4, and even set lower, it doesn't help much.  I'd wager what droughtquake mentioned and your reply is what went wrong because the story's 'cover' page is perfect as are all other things I look at on site with my usual settings, and it's only some of your chapters that do this thing to site's appearance.  I use Word 2013 which uses some html things to format, and I just copy the text  and paste it into the software here...never had a problem.  For Nifty, I do tend to send them the files as htm files with the MS coding removed, and it shows up there when they post it that way...even the foreign letters the Danish bits sometimes use.  :)

I used to use the same copy and paste routine when i was trying other writing things like OpenOffice and LibreOffice and googledocs, and those looked fine too.

For my browsers, I don't know enough to go beyond the basic settings like default fonts and sizes, and letting it choose colors, and those are things I kept consistent from browser to browser.

Not complaining since Kippy and Charlie are awesome in any 'setting'....  :)

Try it again. I replaced the file with one directly from my HTML editor. If that doesn't cure your problem, I don't know what to say. 

 

If it DOES fix it, I know what NOT to do in the future! :)

 

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I had no problem with the original and from the lack of any other comments it does look like it was only CG who struggled.

 

Also don't recall DQ having problems with my formatting. Was that recent or a while go?

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 Short sweet and wonderful. Geron, you have the gift for telling stories within stories without even giving a lead in.  Keep the tales coming so we can keep smiling!!

 

Also, I had the excessive width problem with Chrome. I was able to solve it by reducing the text size with the tools at the top of the page.

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7 minutes ago, Ivor Slipper said:

Also don't recall DQ having problems with my formatting. Was that recent or a while go?

It’s consistent and has been happening for a long time. I’m sure I mentioned it years ago. You tried a few changes, but they haven’t fixed my problem. I stopped mentioning it and save the chapters from Firefox every time.

 

However you format your text, the GA software doesn’t properly code the chapter as correct form of text. This prevents Safari from allowing Reader View mode. Firefox is less strict about observing standards and does allow Reader View mode. Reader View mode switches the background to white and the text to black (no matter what the site displays) and gets rid of extraneous junk like ads, navigation bars, sidebars, and other distractions. (Safari’s Reader View mode can optionally reverse the usual format to white text on a black background and allows you to select the font used [including making the font size larger or smaller], among other choices.) There have been one or two other authors whose text also exhibits the exactly same problem, but it’s been quite awhile since I’ve read any of their stories.  ;–)

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On 2/14/2019 at 3:06 AM, ColumbusGuy said:

Way too short, but it's still got the ol' magic skwish.

Sadly, it's spread way past the edge of the browser, and it's too hard to like anything  comment-wise.  The front page was fine, it was only when the chapter itself came up that this happened, and even the site parts are way off kilter.  :( 

 

CG, It looks normal to me and I keep both my browser zoom at a higher magnification and the font size on GA stories set large. I think the issue is going to be on your end. I'm using Chrome with Windows.

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This one was short, but oh so sweet. All sweet treats should be consumed in moderation. Well done.

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