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PRIME 6. The Squad + Boomers, Gen Xers, & Millenials

   (5 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

Antonio Martellini's a rising star in the family, having turned a dingy Brooklyn bowling alley into a hipster hot spot. When his grandfather asks him to lunch, Tony gets an offer he can't refuse. Can he pull the project off? Is he ready for prime time?

This is a work of fiction set in the real world.
Names, characters, places, and incidents are products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously.
Any other resemblance to actual events, locales, or persons, living or dead, is coincidental.

Copyright © 2020 Carlos Hazday; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 5
  • Characters 7
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Humor 2
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 6
  • World Building 1

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Theo Wahls

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

it is a good background story for CJ's world.It's a world with so many great characters, it can be mined for more stories like Tony's and Dante's and like the last one about Chipper. Way to go.. 

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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Another excellent addition to the satellite series of stories in the CJ universe. This one provides the background for the NYC club PRIME. It does not require having read the previous stories but those will provide context.

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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is the awesome story that shows how Tony came to form PRIME.

We follow Tony and Dante from there initial meetings with Grandpa, through all the all the various events that lead to fantastic PRIME.

Another fantastic story from Carlos, that I highly recommend as a great read.

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· Edited by Albert1434

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Carlos, you just amaze me with yet another wonderful story! The setting was Just perfect, with dialogue so perfectly thought out and so believable, description expertly written and colorful! characters so believable it left me wanting more. I am sure if you read this, you're going to love it just as much as I!

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Gary L

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Another fine piece of creative writing.  How does this guy keep pulling it off, again and again? 

Asolid, 5***** tale.  Thanks

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