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I've spent most of the afternoon and evening reading the story, simply because I couldn't stop once I started. I haven't read the stories in order, but am happy that I'm caught up on how everyone ended up at Camp Refuge. Absolutely loved the story, and all the characters... with the exception of Elias' mother and her scum boyfriend. Great writing on all of the Camp Refuge stories!
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Sad chapter. Not surprising that Lee messed up...again, but sad that Avery got mixed up in it. I'm not a forgiving type of person, so I can understand Greg's reaction. I would probably ask Lee to leave if I were in his position. Harsh maybe, but I don't have time for BS. If he has known that Lee stole the money, he wouldn't have been there to get Avery into trouble and endangering his life.
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My heart breaks for Pat. I can kind of understand where Brad is coming from, however I think he is making a mistake and hurting Pat in the process. He already calls Brad dad, so would any of the other kids even notice if he adopted Pat?
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Same here. Lol! I love Lilith!
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Patrick's story is heartbreaking. So happy he is safe and healing at Sanctuary.
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Jake, don't waste your time and energy. The so-called boyfriend who supposedly loves you is making out with another guy...one that he supposedly hates. Call it a night and go home.
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Can't wait to see what the break in the case is. Emily better not start anything. We may have to pay her a visit if she does. Nobody messes with Sanctuary!
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I was totally in Dylan's corner....until now. Being drunk is no excuse for ending up in an empty room and kissing Liam. Forget alcohol breath, kissing someone who broke your bones would be enough to make me vomit! The only thing Liam deserves is a good, hard throat punch! I kinda hate Dylan as much as I hate Liam at this point.
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Great chapter! I felt bad for Seth waking up alone, but can totally understand Noah rushing out to meet his mom and forgetting to leave a note. Enjoyed the second dinner. Lilith is hilarious! I just love her! I don't know who's gonna be the bad influence on who when Lilith meets Lia! Lol!!
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I think I'm gonna have to bow out on this one. It's pretty obvious that Tristan is gonna forgive Peter, even though he doesn't deserve it. He's gonna go back to Peter, even though he had another life that he kept secret from Tristan, just as he kept Tristan a secret from his own family. Liars and cheats are always gonna be liars and cheats. Great writing, but not my kind of story.
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Seriously?? That was Peter's shitty excuse??? I would have felt for him if they had been in college, just out of high school and his father was paying his expenses. This asshole is a lawyer... with a career... who could move ANYWHERE and practice. He did it all just to ride daddy's coat-tails and cash in. He's a cheat, a liar, and a coward! He should be embarrassed and ashamed! If Tristan falls for this, he's an idiot!
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Hmmm..... That's about all I got for this chapter. Lol
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I agree with you. I see absolutely zero redeeming qualities when it comes to Liam. No way in hell would I ever forgive someone like him. I would take that grudge to the grave!
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Great chapter!! I'm glad Dylan got to unload on Liam. Liam deserved worse, and probably would have gotten it if it hadn't been in the middle of the night. It made me feel so sad when Dylan described what Liam had done to him. What makes him think he deserves any kind of forgiveness?? WTF is with these clueless and entitled assholes?? Between Liam "missing him" and Sebastian asking him out in a date? You have no idea how much I hate these people.
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Great chapter! I'm liking Jake a lot! I think he's perfect for Dylan. So, last chapter u didn't seem too keen on my idea of Dylan rigging Liam's car with explosives. Lol! How about Jake asking Liam to stand behind the Mercedes to make sure the reverse lights work properly???