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    Defiance19
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Def's Scribbles - 2. Chapter 2 - Summer Reminiscence

This poem is totally unedited, so forgive the errors and such..
I hope it's to your liking...

Ohh, those carefree summer days

How I'll miss that summer daze

Heat and passion eyes that glaze

 

Picnics under willow trees

Angry buzzing bumble bees

Your perfect knobby naked knees

 

Wild strawberries from your fingers

Dripping juices - mouth that lingers

And damn, all the thoughts it triggers

 

Steamy sticky summer heat

Open window - fan at our feet

Bodies slamming when they meet

 

Keening sounds fiery hisses

Smother me with languid kisses

Grant me now all my wishes

 

Beaded sweat on your body sprung

Salty droplets caught on my tongue

Making lazy love till we were wrung

 

Those summer days were not in vain

As I listen to the summer rain

I want to do it all again

A big shout out to the folk of MDIC. You made me believe I am better than I am.. ❤️ Thank you..
Thank you, to the ever encouraging tim, and Kitt, for telling me I should put it out here.. xoxo
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Mikiesboy

it's a beautiful poem.   it's yours and you and that's what matters .. not if it's edited or imperfect (and i'm not saying it is, i mean generally)  but to me, if you write poetry.... it is a piece of you. and that can't be wrong.. xoxoo  

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Defiance19
25 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

it's a beautiful poem.   it's yours and you and that's what matters .. not if it's edited or imperfect (and i'm not saying it is, i mean generally)  but to me, if you write poetry.... it is a piece of you. and that can't be wrong.. xoxoo  

Thank you tim, for always, always looking out.. I appreciate it so much. 

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Defiance19
3 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Absolutely beautiful! Screams the moments intense emotion. xoxo

Thank you, jp... you are wonderfully supportive and encouraging and I love you for it. xoxo

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Valkyrie
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Nice job, Def.  I need to put the air conditioner on now... *fans self*  

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9 minutes ago, Valkyrie said:

Nice job, Def.  I need to put the air conditioner on now... *fans self*  

Hehe.. thanks Val.. you rock.. 

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Caz Pedroso

Wonderful...I'm still waiting for the evening to read it to Mark ;) hope to read more when your muse strikes again :hug: 

Edited by Caz Pedroso
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16 minutes ago, LitLover said:

Hot and steamy.  Perfect for a summer night ;)  we'll done, Def :) 

 I blame the rain for the feels... 😊Thank you for reading this Lit.. :hug:

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19 minutes ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Wonderful...I'm still waiting for the evening to read it to Mark ;) hope to read more when your muse strikes again :hug: 

Thank you again Caz.. I can't wait for Mark's uh...reaction.. xoxo :hug:

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Headstall

Bloody brilliant, Def. Hot and expressive, containing humor, desire, lust, and fulfillment... hell of a combination :) 

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12 minutes ago, Headstall said:

Bloody brilliant, Def. Hot and expressive, containing humor, desire, lust, and fulfillment... hell of a combination :) 

Well hell, Gary...🤗 Thank you for supporting everything I do. I really do appreciate it.. 

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MacGreg

Whew. A cold shower is in order! I feel the heat from your words, Def. Steamy, sensual and salacious. I'm glad others prompted you to post it here to be enjoyed by all. Cheers - Mac

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11 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

Whew. A cold shower is in order! I feel the heat from your words, Def. Steamy, sensual and salacious. I'm glad others prompted you to post it here to be enjoyed by all. Cheers - Mac

Super alliteration ☺️Thank you very much Mac..

I appreciate all the encouragement.. 

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mogwhy

wow. i'm glad people nudged you into publishing it. :yes: i hope you continue to be inspired. truth is, i hate summer and everything about summer annoys me, however this piece makes me long for  picnics under a willow. good job!

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2 minutes ago, mogwhy said:

wow. i'm glad people nudged you into publishing it. :yes: i hope you continue to be inspired. truth is, i hate summer and everything about summer annoys me, however this piece makes me long for  picnics under a willow. good job!

Thank you much moggy.. maybe you could wrangle any one of the number of bodies that tumble into your view for that picnic..😉

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mogwhy
2 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

Thank you much moggy.. maybe you could wrangle any one of the number of bodies that tumble into your view for that picnic..😉

awww, def it could be nice but they're all under 35 --too young. heck one looked all of 12. babies :P 

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