Empty Shoes

Empty Shoes is a heartfelt story told, unusually, from the perspective of the loving father of a gay teen. As such, it is written as a series of recollections with minimal dialogue.

It starts out as a coming out tale of sorts, although this is really just a sweet prelude. Years flash by in the first chapter in order to deliver us to to the remaining three chapters, where the real meat of the story is.

I don't want to spoil the story by explaining what happens next, but major themes include the casual cruelty of random chance and the price of courage. It's safe to say that there are hard-hitting passages in the story that some readers may find a bit too close for comfort; we ride with the main character through a terrible situation in which he feels completely powerless to help, and the author puts us right there with him. But, in both the gentle set-up and the aftermath, the story is also a testament to the power of love and the kindness that, under the right circumstances, people are capable of showing one another.

The author, @drsawzall, seems to be wary of putting dialogue into his stories, and I often find myself wishing he would give his characters a bit more of a voice to help us learn about them, how they see the world and what makes them tick. However, the retrospective nature of this tale plays to the author's strengths, and I was surprised by how deeply I cared for these characters despite the narrated style of most of the tale.

The ending of the story could be accused of straying from dramatic closure into political statement but, aside from that: a short story that punches above its weight on an emotional level, and a job well done.

Very relevant and very, very, intense and so sadly all too real.

The author does a great job of telling this story from the perspective of everyday people  instead of the talking heads on TV. In this case it was the families of a gay teen couple but it could have been any of us.

It is a fictional story, but unfortunately based on too many actual events. Well written and articulated, I hope it makes a difference where it counts. This is told from the perspective of the ordinary person, not the hyped up media point of view. A compelling and thought provoking read.

If only this story and so many events of this nature that have occurred could change the way we enforce gun safety. Unfortunately, the radical right seems to have this tied up in Congress and it seems to go no place. I pray things will eventually change but I am not sure I have faith in the American system to ever address it adequately. When it comes down to it, the 2nd amendment was done at a time when multiple shout machine guns were not available and maybe if we enforced it as it would have been then, we could at least lower the number of dead and wounded

Empty Shoes is masterfully written with heart, compassion, and respect for the victims of such tragedies spoken of.  My personal wish would be to see this, as @raven1 so beautifully described, an impassioned plea for reason over extreme ideology, reach the public at large.

This story is so unbelievably power and so filled with superb dialogue and discription. I loved it and if you read it you will as well I am sure! It has wonderful and lows, I shed more then a few tears as I read this story. Ideas here in I would wish could come to pass for the betterment of the world! So give it a try and I am sure you will love it! 

Empty Shoes is a poignant story with a hopeful ending. At first it seems to be just another teen love story, however it is a story of the strength and love of families. It is also a tribute to friends that support the families as they face the emotional upheavals of tragic events they experience.

In addition, this is a convincing essay on how Americans have become disfranchised with the media and government corrupted by greed and power. The government is so severely polarised that it is unable to make even the simplest changes to protect the citizens, especially children.  This story is an impassioned plea for reason over extreme ideology.  It is so real and emotional as we become attached to these characters and feel the love in each individual of the families.  Empty Shoes is a skilfully written story by a great author and calls on us to reflect upon the frailty of today's society, as we look forward to a better day.