Dirty Pool

When I first read this story I didn’t know what the term ‘Dirty Pool’ meant. I had to rely on google and the urban dictionary. After that, I understood the title a lot better.

What the friends do for the couple is sweet in a way but also a bit daring. I could have so easily backfired on them.

In this case, it is the right thing. Again, like others of Gary’s story, this highlights the importance of communication within relationships. If you don’t talk about what is going wrong, then it can’t be fixed.

Another intriguing read from a great author.

This story is a little masterpiece. I’ve already known that @Headstall is genius in writing dialogues and (mis)communication topics but idea to put something that might be a multi-chapter story in one conversation is fantastic. Locked in room by friends, two separated lovers try to make a conversation and resolve issues that separated them. Starting with borders which seems to be unbreakable, story evolves so that you, as a reader, are going through the same feelings (anger, disappointment, doubts, questionings and revelation at the end) as protagonists.

I love series, but bringing complete potential series in one chapter dialogue is work of art.

I think I was right about the title could have been NO EXIT The dialogue was Gary perfect and oh my God the description ! So much Gary Magic!

Going through a breakup can be hard enough when there's an underlying reason, such as cheating, but when it's based on misinterpretation, a 3rd party with his own agenda, or a lack of communication, it can be devastating.  This story is about a bad breakup and how the parties deal with it afterward.  

@Headstall uses powerful writing to display the emotions involved on both sides, and you'll feel like you're one of their friends witnessing the aftermath.  Take time to read this moving and heartfelt short story - you'll be glad you did. 

Gary writes some great novels, but not as well know are his short story gems.  Dirty Pool is a realistic and compelling story of the power of friends, the need for communication and trust in a relationship.  It has a happy and feel good ending.  This story can be read as a great way to just feel better, or as a sampler of @Headstall's stories and awesome skills as a writer.  I highly recommend this story, as well as others by Headstall.

A great story of miscommunication and lack of communication where a relationship is given another chance by friends who take a big risk. If you think you are at risk of becoming emotional remember to keep the Kleenex handy, maybe buy an extra box. A recommended ten-star read.