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The Runner

   (6 reviews)
Genres: Romance
Sub-genres: General Romance

Potluck Theme: National Forest

Jace is a good kid, guy next door, dutiful to his mother, respected by everyone he meets. All that changes when he walks in on something that spurred him to action, an action that forces himself to look into the mirror and wonder just who he was. He doesn't have time right now though, right now he has to run.

Copyright © 2021 Krista; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (5 members)

  • Action Packed 3
  • Addictive/Pacing 4
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 3
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 0

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  • 1. The Runner
    • 17,750 Words
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    • 17 Comments

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wildone

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

Very intriguing situation and story that evolves around it. Krista does an amazing job of making you feel like you are in the chapter by her descriptive scenes. You can feel, hear, taste and smell the environment that Jace is in .

Well worth the read!

Response from the author:

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I like the five senses and the more you use them, the more people can relate the surroundings for sure. :D 

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Headstall

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

This is definitely worth a read! It's a sad and serious situation the author presents, and she has given us an intriguing character and a harsh journey, yet there are some amusing moments to be had because of said memorable character. Yes, you might end up wanting more, but that's okay. I don't want to give any spoilers so I will stop now. Cheers!

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Bill W

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

If you like mysteries with interesting, yet flawed characters, this is a story you'll want to read.  Krista sets up a compelling, yet heartbreaking, situation where everyone pulls the short straw, but it doesn't end there.  She then takes you on a roller coaster ride as Jace, the main character, tries to run and hide, while at the same time trying to deal with what happened.  Her descriptions of what's going on makes you feel as if you are going through it and experiencing everything for yourself.  You'll be doing yourself a disservice if you don't take time to read this evocative and riveting story.  

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dughlas

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Well worth reading. A sadly plausible opening scenario sets a good kid on the wrong foot. Krista has created an intriguing character in Jace and her descriptive writing sets the reader firmly in place within an ever evolving story. While serious the story is not without humor and I suspect most readers will find themselves wanting more.

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Mancunian

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

An action packed start to a story that leaves you wanting more and descriptiveness that draws you in, it's a compelling read. I enjoyed it and I'm sure others will too.

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drsawzall

   8 of 9 members found this review helpful 8 / 9 members

A gripping tale of intrigue and suspense. Toss in some mayhem and danger and you have something that will surprise you!

Response from the author:

Thank you for leaving a review! I am glad you enjoyed the story. :)

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