Seasons Of The Son - 1. Seasons Of The Son

5 hours ago, chris191070 said:

A great tale of 4 seasons and discovery of naked men and being gay.

Thanks.  Wasn’t sure how it was going to be received. Happy it’s getting positive comments and emojis.

5 hours ago, weinerdog said:

"We had joy we had fun we had seasons in the.....Oh it's not that one?

Well good because this was a lot better.You managed to pack a lot of growing up and self realization in those verses

 

 

 

 

Better than an old, somewhat hit song? Cool. Glad you enjoyed my mini-autobiography.

Nicely done. I hope you continue to practice writing poetry.

15 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Nicely done. I hope you continue to practice writing poetry.

Thanks. I guess if I have an idea that motivates me, I can do more. Thanks for your help too.

I, too, have been testing out the poetry waters. 

tim is an excellent mentor. Keep up the good work!

17 minutes ago, kbois said:

I, too, have been testing out the poetry waters. 

tim is an excellent mentor. Keep up the good work!

Thanks. Yes, I saw your entry, interesting.

You describe the seasons of discovery in 270 words. Beautifully done.

1 hour ago, Parker Owens said:

You describe the seasons of discovery in 270 words. Beautifully done.

Thanks. I'm glad it is appreciated.

WOW, truly loved this, just so well done...

1 minute ago, centexhairysub said:

WOW, truly loved this, just so well done...

Appreciate it. Thanks much.

I guess I’m more of a poet than I knew.

An interesting tale of childhood sexual exploration to discovering your sexual identity.  An interesting tale of  one young mans life, once that I'm sure many of us can identify with.  Thanks for sharing this.  

2 hours ago, Bill W said:

An interesting tale of childhood sexual exploration to discovering your sexual identity.  An interesting tale of  one young mans life, once that I'm sure many of us can identify with.  Thanks for sharing this.  

Happy to share, happy it’s been well received.

A wonderful and concise journey of one boy/man's discovery. I think the way you used 'seasons' worked well here. It can be such a lonely confusing path to take, and you made me feel that here. I liked the conclusion showing self awareness. Well done, sir. Cheers! 

5 minutes ago, Headstall said:

A wonderful and concise journey of one boy/man's discovery. I think the way you used 'seasons' worked well here. It can be such a lonely confusing path to take, and you made me feel that here. I liked the conclusion showing self awareness. Well done, sir. Cheers! 

Thanks much. And to think it was an idea out of the blue. At least putting it all together.

Your poem is a great interpretation of the anthology theme. The way of finding yourself divided in seasons, perfect.

I really like the title too.

Thank you, for sharing. 

Thanks for the positive feedback. I’ve gotten more of that than I ever expected.