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  1. Stellar

    Blood And Stone

    The interwoven pasts of the Mishith and Jzu Krrm are important lore, certainly. Though, as foundational as it is, the significant connecting elements that link to the rest of what is going on all occur in the time of the hybrid. Jasu Kirmith history can be broken into three basic periodic aspects. Firstly, the era of renewed scientific discoveries and sustained large-scale interstellar expansion achieved through hybridisation, eventually culminating in quantum-based technology. Secondly, the cataclysmic reality-splitting event itself that was produced by that technology and caused the enemy's introduction. Lastly, the course of the conflict up until the war's abrupt -- and not fully explained -- halt at Lucere's siege, and the Sundering being committed. It's those pieces that will be the most enlightening when you can slot them together with greater detail. As we work our way toward the story ending, the information will be less and less obtuse, I promise.
  2. Stellar

    Blood And Stone

    I'm glad I'm proving educational in any sense! Thanks for reading and enjoying my work.
  3. Stellar

    Blood And Stone

    ESCALATION "The next threat arrives unforeseen, with guarded balance turning instead to rising crisis." -o-0-O-0-o- The very moment Admiral Yasir Lugor heard the tactical officer's voice and saw the incoming notification appear directly before him, he understood the deadly peril he faced, and the depths to which they had all been deceived. In that single microcosm of time, it was plain to him. Layer upon layer of duplicity. Ahead was the primary swarm of Disciples a
  4. Stellar

    Inescapable

    Well, the Herald isn't technically dead. Not yet, and 'yet' is the important word here. As Shay says, temporal dilation means that the process of the Herald being crushed into the singularity will take some indeterminate amount of time that's probably greater than the universe's current age squared. This is not any exaggeration either; being so close to that much mass makes space-time absurdly warped to the point that time is near to stopped. In a very real sense, to the outside cosmos, all black holes are forever in the process of collapsing into their singularities, with the inrushing mass frozen in the slowest of slow motions as everything is dragged to the core. A nanosecond inside is equal to a literal eternity outside. However ... the Herald's fate is now sealed, and it cannot influence anything outside of where it is. So, though it's not dead *yet*, it has effectively been removed from the equation. Given that the alien swarm was already following the Herald's specific steps to attack Earth even as it went absent to chase Shay and friends, there's a good chance nothing major will immediately change after the snake's head is removed. The body -- the attacking armada -- has instructions and knows where, when, and how to act. As for the 'spy mission', I'm assuming you're referring to Iskandar meeting Lucas. That just didn't feature this chapter, but it will soon. Not going to say anything else about the Master, because at this point there is nothing for me to say. If your questions are ones that I can provide any commentary or insight on, feel free to ask away!
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    Inescapable

    Even as we jumped to a new location within the Milky Way, the Herald's most recent words would not fade from my mind. Like a shadow that persisted no matter how much light there was, the creature's insight and precognition was insidious. It always saw a way to subvert every plan I made to beat it. It always knew how, or what, or where; even with my best efforts to throw it off. It kept adapting, no matter what I did. There had to be a way to break the sequence. Mira
  6. Stellar

    In The Flesh

    Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of Spirit of Fire.
  7. Stellar

    Lucid Truth

    I'm delighted, and very flattered that you think so highly of Aspects of Dawn. Thank you for your kind words and for reading my work, I appreciate it greatly!
  8. Stellar

    Golden Child

    Of course Darren is playing some kind of game here! There's no way he'd give himself up without an ulterior motive. It's safe to assume his voluntary captivity has something to do with the meeting he had with his family when Mordred delivered the Fear. Araziah's solution to the impasse with Sebby was ... if Torsten won't choose between us, then maybe he'll choose both of us. As the last thing Torsten does is lock the bedroom door, you can assume he likes the idea very much.
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    Dream Of Starlight

    It must be noted that most air dragons are not naturally as friendly and understanding as Sebby is being here. Like all dragons, they look down on humans to a degree, and the sky children tend to be like fairy folk -- playful, curious, glamorous, witty, but also like the fey kind, they can be very alien and inhumanly unpredictable too. If you were to get on their bad side or cause an offence to an air dragon you did not know well, they might act capricious, cunning, mercurial, and perhaps whimsical in a cruel way. Having said that, our Sebby is more acclimated to humans than most, and it is because of his interest in Torsten in particular that he is unusually warm to those around him. If it were not for that interest, he would be more detached and probably still living his best dragon life, exploring and sleeping his way around Europe. Sebby's treatment of Araziah is even more extraordinary though, because though they might be rivals, their experiences are uniquely similar. It's a sort of irony that Sebby understands him perhaps better than anybody else. He's a lovable individual, and one of my personal favourites.
  10. Stellar

    Strength Of Will

    Well, the word is simply referring to punishment, but in a more historical sense it has often been used in specifically religious terms, usually referring to divine retribution, such as Attila being called the Scourge of God for a devastating a large area of early medieval Europe. With regard to everything you quote relating to Sebby and Xander fighting, I will explain. Torsten is with Viktor, both of them distant from the conflict and outside the fortress, with Torsten safe on the gunship. Torsten sees what is about to happen and convinces Viktor to intervene in order to prevent disaster. So Viktor, unable to physically cross the distance in time, uses water magic and creates a spear of ice. He hurls that spear across the gulf to strike Xander, which succeeds in distracting the fire dragon long enough to prevent him reaching the tower top where he would have turned the tables and effectively killed Araziah. This distraction allows Sebby time to catch Xander and attack him. What type of dragon is Sebby? He is an air dragon, and his magic -- as we learned a chapter of two ago -- is based primarily around illusion, which is what he uses here. Xander attacks a decoy, unware it isn't real, which is why it dissolves -- it's just a mirage that Xander believes is the air dragon assaulting him. Then Sebby does a magical flex just to prove how cool he is, binding Xander with lightning chains and executing him through electrocution. Lucy gets a lot of flack and isn't a favourite, but she's still a loyal friend to Torsten and her presence in the story is absolutely essential. I think you are confusing two very different concepts here. There is 'father' in the meaning of a literal parent, the male whose genes you inherited and who (in most cases) was involved in raising and caring for you as their offspring. Then there is the more biblical figurative 'father figure', and is used in a symbolic way to speak of a deity as a parent who protects and guides. The only ones that could claim the deities as actual parents were the firstborn in the legendary times that have long since past, so this is no longer the case. In the current context, you will see the dragons of each type refer to their creators as 'mother' or 'father' respectively. You will also see each type described as 'children' of a deity; i.e. 'children of flame' or 'sky child'. Even occasionally one type will refer to one of the other types as 'cousins'; water dragons may speak fondly of air dragons as their cousins, because they regard the two goddesses as sisters. None of this is purely literal -- these relationships are the biblical figurative type. All these described family connections are symbolic in nature. HOWEVER ... sometimes the dragons may be speaking about their real families, and you must use context to differentiate when this occurs. This mostly applies to the Seventh House since theirs is at the story centre. For example, Darren talking about Kaia, Faye, and Mordred, or those three referring to Darren and his brothers; these are blood cousins to one another. Similarly, the big grey dragon that shows up at the end to pull Mordred out of trouble is his actual father; he is the one nicknamed Smoke-touched that appeared at the airstrip where Minato was in the previous chapter. At that time, he was currently on his way to the fortress to meet his children, Mordred and Kaia, but he made a detour when he spotted some humans camped out along the Corridor. Naturally, he had to stop and deal with that. So, he arrived at just the correct time to get his boy out of the difficult situation. I should also say ... all this is to stop the dead god being resurrected. He wouldn't just show up like this randomly in a new body before the pieces are even in place and with no explanation. His rebirth would be a big, complicated, messy, ceremony, with an explosive climactic spectacle.
  11. Stellar

    Strength Of Faith

    I thought he might grow on you. He is my favourite, in some ways. Araziah is an extraordinary individual, and a prodigy by most accounts. Unfortunately, beyond being the seer, Triskeleth had no special strength. She was alike any other dragon in that she could not escape the torture of such a device. I'm glad the lore is appealing to you. I put the background into this world for a reason! Little house dragon? Are you looking for a small pet, like a cat-sized one? Or are you looking for a live-in boy, like Sebby, who knows all the tricks?
  12. Stellar

    Risk And Tenacity

    I should point out that what Shay is attempting to do now is different from when the Herald resurrected itself. When it died in orbit of Dagen's Grace, it had lost internal control because of Mira and Elia, becoming rudderless and allowing Shay to damage the superstructure and cause the internal meltdown that shattered it into a gazillion bits. Here, however, he wants to disassemble it through heating until the constituent atoms come apart. Essentially, he is attempting to kill the Herald in a manner that it cannot return from, because the reversal would be too extreme to manage. Whether or not using a star to vapourise the leviathan would have been enough is an open question because it adapted before the theory could be tested. On the other hand, the swarm lingering near Earth is not quite so unkillable, but it is still a swarm! They can die due to railguns and standard human kinetic weapons, but their war is one of simple attrition and unforeseen traps. Different combatants, different arena, different strategy. To answer the last thought you pose from this quote first: they don't. Shay led them away to protect the others on that planet in the first place, so by necessity he won't return until he's victorious. As for your other questions ... will the Jzu Krrm help with this? What purpose will they serve? Well, I should ask a couple of questions back. Why might it be so critical that these two divided halves meet up again? Why did Dagen use the term 'Yugan the Unifier' when mentioning his descendent to Lucas? And perhaps most pertinent of all: if Yugan succeeds in reversing the Sundering, what must happen to the Mishith and the Jzu Krrm?
  13. Stellar

    Another Language

    I did tell you anybody could die, didn't I? But Sebby isn't dead yet, so if you want to find out, you'll just have to read on. Crawley has the glove/gauntlet device, and he's nowhere near Overmountain. That collar is simply a restraint to stop Araziah transforming. If any rescue or escape attempt is to be made, they'll have to find some way to get rid of it, absolutely.
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