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Prompt Me! #488 & #489


I can't believe it's already April. And since it's the 1st of April, guess what that means? April Fools Day!!!! Anyone had any great pranks played on them so far today? Played any pranks on anyone else? What is the best prank that was ever played on you OR that you were a part of? Enquiring minds want to know!!!! While you think on that, I guess it's time to take a look at the prompts for this week!

 

Prompt 488 – Creative
Tag – First Line
“Please come quickly. I’m afraid to be here alone!”

 

Prompt 489 – Creative
Tag – Meteorite
It was a beautiful night, with a full moon shining bright. You lay on the blanket watching the meteor shower. Suddenly, you notice a red streak heading right for you. You stand up and begin to run, only to be knocked over by the blast from the meteorite crashing into the ground. You go back to look at the meteor only to be found by the police and many scientists will immediately quarantine you. What is up with the meteorite?

 

Today I decided to showcase all the responses to AC Benus' newest prompt series, O. Henry Short Story Prompt #1:


Holding the advertising card in his hand, Rudolf climbs the last stair and reaches the top floor. While he catches his breath, thinking maybe he should finally do something with his gym membership, he swivels his head around. Another regular door, this with a welcome mat saying: IN DOG WE TRUST. And on the other side... Is this the green door? He looks at the crumpled sheet of paper again. It still only says: THE GREEN DOOR.

 

Rudolf strains his ears. A TV murmurs in the background and the smell of fried bacon permeates the air. Quite normal. He scoffs. What did he expect? That a door would open magically and lead him into Narnia? He chuckles at his stupidity. Someone obviously played a practical joke and of course, he fell for it. Typical.

 

But there is a green door. “Yeah, and behind it lives some punk kid, who thought it funny to screw with the landlord.” And with me.


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Rudy pressed the down button on the wall panel repeatedly, scowling at the numbers above the elevator doors. The arrow was on the lit-up two. He was on the top floor. The twentieth. He shoved his hands into the pockets of his tattered jeans and paced back and forth, muttering to himself.

 

So much for his little ‘adventure’. He’d have to have a word with the behemoth outside. Rudy pulled the crumpled business card out of his pocket and stared at it. The Green Door were the only words imprinted on it. A large African-American man had given it to him just outside the building. He had given him five, in fact. Each one bearing the same three words. Curious, he’d checked the cards discarded by others who took them from the man. Those advertised an investment company. He’d have thrown them out, too.
The Green Door intrigued him. Rudy longed for adventure. Something…anything….to take his mind off the dull drudgery of daily life.


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Rudolf Steiner lifted the last forkful of Black Forest cake into his mouth, chewed briefly, and washed it down with a mouthful of black coffee. Elbows on the table, he held the now empty-cup by the fingertips of both hands. As he sat, Rudolf looked wistfully across the table at the empty seat. He wondered if that seat would ever be filled—he was so alone.

 

The waiter interrupted his reverie when he placed the check on the table. After leaving cash plus a ten percent tip, Rudolf slipped on his jacket and left the Black Kettle restaurant.

 

As he walked home down Jackson Street, Rudolf thought about his life. ‘Rudi, you need something to happen, there is no excitement, no adventure. God, I wish something—anything—would just happen to me. No, I lie, I want something romantic to happen to me.’


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Rudolf lumbered, lost in thought on his way to the restaurant. For so long he had been content to just move along with his life without being a part of it. Never doing more than he had to.

 

Today he had awakened with a feeling he couldn't shake. All he knew was there was this inexplicable need to do something, change his life around somehow.

 

But what. Nothing exciting happened to him. For years he had worked the same job, ate the same dinner at the same restaurant. His home life was nothing special either.
As he followed the host to be seated he passed a laughing couple holding hands. He didn't even have love. Who would want him anyway?


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Now, time for a quick question... How are you liking the new format? Do you like the showcasing of all the responses to a single prompt? If you do, like the blog entry, if you don't, comment and tell me why!

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FieldMan

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I like the new format and I'm commenting anyway :P I like the fact that all responses are displayed in the blog entry. I'm not following every author, and I'm not checking the story updates regularly either, so it's useful IMHO.

Plus, it can be a way for new authors to get some good exposure **shrugs**

Renee Stevens

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I like the new format and I'm commenting anyway :P I like the fact that all responses are displayed in the blog entry. I'm not following every author, and I'm not checking the story updates regularly either, so it's useful IMHO.

Plus, it can be a way for new authors to get some good exposure **shrugs**

 

I have no issue with the commenting on top of the like! That was kind of my thought in sharing more than one. It brings readers attention to more than just one author and hopefully is helping to expand the different authors' readership. I hope to continue this way. I'm considering some other options as well, but some of them are a bit time consuming, so I need to consider carefully before I start, make sure that what I want to do is something I can do on a consistent basis.

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FieldMan

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I have no issue with the commenting on top of the like! That was kind of my thought in sharing more than one. It brings readers attention to more than just one author and hopefully is helping to expand the different authors' readership. I hope to continue this way. I'm considering some other options as well, but some of them are a bit time consuming, so I need to consider carefully before I start, make sure that what I want to do is something I can do on a consistent basis.

If I may, adding a short synopsis (by the author) might make it even more appealing for potential readers

AC Benus

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Thanks for featuring all the Green Door stories. The response to the prompt has been awesome, and just the other day I stumbled upon an O. Henry story I don't think I've read before. It will be the basis of prompt No. 2 - and best of all (I still can't get over how the author did it way back then) it features a same-sex couple!

 

Look for it about mid April. In the meantime, I have a Poetry Prompt warming up in the bullpen for anyone interested ;)

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Puppilull

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Look for it about mid April. In the meantime, I have a Poetry Prompt warming up in the bullpen for anyone interested ;)

More poetry! I know I have a few outstanding ones, but a new prompt sounds great and since my current story is almost finished, that leaves room for more challenging tasks.

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Renee Stevens

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If I may, adding a short synopsis (by the author) might make it even more appealing for potential readers

 

I can see the appeal, but to be honest, doing a short synopsis would be problematic. I think it would make the blog post a bit clunky, and I'd have to contact all the authors and wait, but then for those authors that didn't get back to me in time, they wouldn't be able to be a part of the blog post. Also, some authors don't post their prompt response until Wednesday or Thursday and there wouldn't be time to get a synopsis from those authors.

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Renee Stevens

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However, if authors want to add a synopsis in the comments, they can do that.

FieldMan

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I can see the appeal, but to be honest, doing a short synopsis would be problematic. I think it would make the blog post a bit clunky, and I'd have to contact all the authors and wait, but then for those authors that didn't get back to me in time, they wouldn't be able to be a part of the blog post. Also, some authors don't post their prompt response until Wednesday or Thursday and there wouldn't be time to get a synopsis from those authors.

I was more picturing it along the lines of a short synopsis provided by the author - if (s)he wanted to, of course - as (s)he posted the link to his response in the adequate forum topic; and that this synopsis would be integrated on top in the quote frames of the blog entry - in order not to make it too clunky.

Yet, I can definitely see how inconvenient it may turn out to be. Mea culpa :P

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Cia

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I was more picturing it along the lines of a short synopsis provided by the author - if (s)he wanted to, of course - as (s)he posted the link to his response in the adequate forum topic; and that this synopsis would be integrated on top in the quote frames of the blog entry - in order not to make it too clunky.

Yet, I can definitely see how inconvenient it may turn out to be. Mea culpa :P

 

It was a good idea, just not feasible. Usually I need at least a month to be able to arrange the CSR and author feature posts for interviews and any special content between me and the author, and the times when I've dropped the ball and had to do it within a week of the blog date, it's been extremely difficult unless the author can make up for the lack of time frame.

 

Renee has it even harder trying to get readers to write reviews for the blog or even author self-promo posts, so any new blog features that require lead time just aren't usually possible because it already takes many hours per week to arrange for future content, post current content, track past content, etc....

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