Wow. Great work Dom! I love the world you managed to create in so few lines. You have a way of making things so vivid in the least amount of words possible, so that the descriptions don't get dull and long-winded just for the sake of being so. And this was a great example of it. Love it!

this was my favorite out the numerous contributions so far. Great Job!

Wow. Great work Dom! I love the world you managed to create in so few lines. You have a way of making things so vivid in the least amount of words possible, so that the descriptions don't get dull and long-winded just for the sake of being so. And this was a great example of it. Love it!

I agree. What a great little story!

Thanks, Dom.

Good job Dom!

Your short exercise shows how much of an author you are. Your descriptive writing always manages to create a vivid, pictorial view in my mind.

I'm glad to hear that you've found the inspiration to start writing WT again... Can't wait.

As for OS, don't be pressured to release it fast. Take your time. We will wait as long as we have to.

Awesome Job, Dom!

A/N: This was inspired by a writing exercise from Steve (shdowgod) in one of the author