My Dark Prince

[Ieshwar]

My Dark Prince

 

I saw him the other day,

Amongst the tears and pains

He stood there, passive and still

Those black pools, long hair, pale face,

Everything pulled me towards him

 

After that I was never the same

I was the shark that had tasted blood

Every day, every night, I thought of him

I wanted him, even at the price of my life

I looked for him, yearned for him

 

I heard stories about him, false stories

He was another victim of man

[The Reaper]

I like a poem with no periods or anything, it leaves it open to personal interpretation (about the dynamics of the sentences) wither puts pressure on the lyrics, and when the lyrics are powerful it means so much more.bravo

Edited October 22, 2007 by The Reaper

[ixyam]

This is beautiful Ieshwar , darn ! now I have to look you up for more

[Ieshwar]

Sorry for being late!

 

Reaper said:

I like a poem with no periods or anything, it leaves it open to personal interpretation (about the dynamics of the sentences) wither puts pressure on the lyrics, and when the lyrics are powerful it means so much more.bravo

 

Thanks! I never bothered putting much punctuation in poetry. Never understood is it should be period or comma!

 

ixyam said:

This is beautiful Ieshwar , darn ! now I have to look you up for more

 

Thanks a lot!

 

Ieshwar

[AFriendlyFace]

Great poem, Ieshwar!!

 

But don't leave us in suspense! I'm dying to know what happened after the protagonist made the potion!!

 

Awesome job! Really good imagery!

 

-Kevin