another set of haikus :)

[moonwolf]

Imagine a world

At his best and at their worst

Memories we share

 

Scent getting weaker

Oblivion is taking me

Rest is what I need

 

Raging inferno

You put that fire in us

Snow won

[Demetz]

I like poems like this.... they make me think, wondering what some things refer to, and then putting everything together as the poem continues, forming a coherent interpretation...

 

Very nice

[scoopny]

[Tiger]

Those are nice, Jason. I actually gave haikus a try myself. I must call you the master though.

[moonwolf]

I like poems like this.... they make me think, wondering what some things refer to, and then putting everything together as the poem continues, forming a coherent interpretation...

 

Very nice

 

Thanks Demets, I had a hard time working on this one, spent a better portion of the night writing this making it all this imagery. G;ad you liked it

 

Those are nice, Jason. I actually gave haikus a try myself. I must call you the master though.

 

thanks Tiger.

Master ?? I wouldn't say that... I just have a muse working for me through good and bad times. I just let my fingers type and make it in imagery which is the point in haikus leaving people wondering "what the heck does it mean exactly ?"

 

Glad you liked it

 

Jason aka Moonwolf

[S.L. Lewis]

Wonderful once more. I love the way you do haikus. Keep writing and posting for us. Though, they have a bit of a sad tone to them, don't they?

[moonwolf]

Wonderful once more. I love the way you do haikus. Keep writing and posting for us. Though, they have a bit of a sad tone to them, don't they?

 

Ya they do.... when I wrote them it was mainly to say sorry to sacha.. I was just closing myself to him and to everyone in fact. old instincts coming back to the surface

[AFriendlyFace]

I think this is my favourite of yours

 

Well done, Jason.