Desert Dropping

[boy on a string]

Nice chapter, Dom.

 

Hope you put 9 out soon ... if you do, you will be catching up ... only two chapters behind now ...

 

I really like the ending ... New it would be a cliff hanger. If you ever did a chapter that didn't end in a cliff hanger, I think half your readers would faint .

 

Boy on a String

 

good

[Myr]

Did you mean Dropping? Droppings seems to be something else

[primewordsmith]

Did you mean Dropping?  Droppings seems to be something else

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Yeah, well.... with the apparent lack of action in certain quarters, Desert Drooping, might be more appropriate

[Dalmania]

With the additions of chapters nine and ten, we have even more to enjoy from this story. I like the fact that I cannot predict what is going to happen from chapter to chapter and even where any particular chapter is headed. The story is well written.

FM

[Myr]

Chapter 11 was just posted.