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  • 7 months later...

Very intense! I really liked it. You're right, it works quite well as a rap song. In fact after I read the Eminem part I just went ahead and imagined him performing it for the rest of the piece.


I'm glad you mentioned that you imagined it as a song. I definitely think I read it in a different way, with a different flow and rhythm as a result.


great job!



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