[Andrew_Q_Gordon] Archangel by Quonus10

[KevinD]

I too enjoyed this very much and echo what others have already said; though I wonder, is there more to Nick's brother and his his dislike of Nick? Maybe more to be explored along that line?

[Andrew Q Gordon]

I too enjoyed this very much and echo what others have already said; though I wonder, is there more to Nick's brother and his his dislike of Nick? Maybe more to be explored along that line?

 

Antya is a bit miffed at me for having so many things in the air - there is even another one or two I haven't mentioned on here that she knows about so she is pushing me to revisit this and another one before going back to Second Shot.

 

But Not sure any of the brother's dislike Nick - Raphael's interest has more to do with the plot for the main story than with Nick per se. But that is for another day for me to write.

 

Thanks for the note and for reading

 

Andy

[Northern Dutch Guy]

I liked this story very much.

 

This will give hope for a lot of boys ...

 

Not every gay boy thinks of himself as being is a wet dream for other guys, so when 'the prince on the white horse' comes around...

 

You do not even have to be an angel for that!

 

thanks for this beautifull story.

[Andrew Q Gordon]

I liked this story very much.

 

This will give hope for a lot of boys ...

 

Not every gay boy thinks of himself as being is a wet dream for other guys, so when 'the prince on the white horse' comes around...

 

You do not even have to be an angel for that!

 

thanks for this beautifull story.

 

 

Thanks for the comments - I had/have a real attactment to this story - not sure why. I very much want to get back to it, but right not I lack the time. Glad you enjoyed it too.

 

Andy

[uccleman]

Interesting story. Why the name Nick? Is this just a possible dimension to the story or am I missing something already?

[Andrew Q Gordon]

Nick? No reason, I like the name - was my grandfather's. I envision a much longer story, but I don't envision the time to write it. I have the basic idea in my head, but with all that I have happening, I am not sure I will get to this any time soon. But who knows.

 

Thanks for reading and letting me know.

 

Andy

[naaz]

Not the best story of yours, which happens to be Purpose

[Andrew Q Gordon]

Not the best story of yours, which happens to be Purpose

 

Well, I don't if I should disagree or agree

 

Actually, I feel Purpose is my best work too, though it was not as well received as other works. I don't think I excel at the short story format that is the anthology so I think I'd have to agree this would not be my best. But thanks for reading and for the for agreeing with me on Purpose

[Andrew Q Gordon]

As most of you who've read my stuff know, I wrote this for the Summer 2011 anthology - duh right? It says so when you click on the link - and I've been promising, threatening, teasing folks that I'd take this up and go with it.

 

Well I think that time is now. I've started to rewrite this - mean tear it down and redo it completely because this was written as a 10K anthology entry and the story needs to be quite a bit longer. I was hoping that those who've read it can give me some feed back.

 

Specifically I'd like know where you think it needs more umph. Just to be let folks know, I won't be starting it with the two of them in bed. That 'worked' in a shortened version, but I want to start with before they meet and then i want there to be a bit longer courtship before he learns the truth about Alex and Trevor and his own 'angelness' So any suggestion would be helpful. you can post them here or you can email me them.

 

Andrewqgordon@gmail.com

 

Thanks

 

Andy

[MikeL]

Well, I finally got around to reading this story. It's one of several amazing works that I have managed to overlook in the last couple of years. Andy is not reluctant to write about a great variety of subject matter. I really liked this one and hope he finds the time to expand the story. I'll not allow another of his stories to go unread longer than...oh...two days.

[Andrew Q Gordon]

I've said before I see this as some thing of an end of days type story. I just need to flesh it out. I also see a lot of heart ache a long the way for Trevor, Nick and Alex - especially Nick who's caught between his best friend whom he's been in love with for years and his soul mate, who he just really met. That is what I hope will give teeth to the story. But we'll see how it comes out in the end.

 

Thanks Mike, glad it hit the spot for you.

 

Andy