MJ85 Posted May 19, 2012 Posted May 19, 2012 Sometimes people die Sorryz! Oh...come on! You had it well set up that he was killed along the way. That doesn't mean you prepared readers for something like that!
Site Administrator Cia Posted May 19, 2012 Author Site Administrator Posted May 19, 2012 Well someone did once tell me I was sick and sadistic
Bandage Posted May 28, 2012 Posted May 28, 2012 Hehehe Marvelous ending to the story! Can't wait till you write on in that universe! I especially likes that little twist with Dav at the very end, didn't see that coming at all! So, I'll bow to your fabulous story! 1
Site Administrator Cia Posted May 28, 2012 Author Site Administrator Posted May 28, 2012 Thanks so much Bandage! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I didn't want to overwhelm readers with the ending being all technical, but I couldn't resist adding a few extra details to finish out the story.
BigAKHorton Posted April 25, 2013 Posted April 25, 2013 Thank you, Cia! Hypnotic was great, and I've really enjoyed all the Carthera series.
Site Administrator Cia Posted April 29, 2013 Author Site Administrator Posted April 29, 2013 Thank you, Cia! Hypnotic was great, and I've really enjoyed all the Carthera series. Thanks BigAKHorton! I'm so glad you enjoyed my stories!
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