[Cia] Hypnotic

[MJ85]

Sometimes people die Sorryz!

 

Oh...come on! You had it well set up that he was killed along the way. That doesn't mean you prepared readers for something like that!

[Cia]

Well someone did once tell me I was sick and sadistic

[Bandage]

Hehehe Marvelous ending to the story! Can't wait till you write on in that universe!

I especially likes that little twist with Dav at the very end, didn't see that coming at all!

 

So, I'll bow to your fabulous story!

[Cia]

Thanks so much Bandage! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I didn't want to overwhelm readers with the ending being all technical, but I couldn't resist adding a few extra details to finish out the story.

[BigAKHorton]

Thank you, Cia!  Hypnotic was great, and I've really enjoyed all the Carthera series.

[Cia]

Thank you, Cia!  Hypnotic was great, and I've really enjoyed all the Carthera series.

Thanks BigAKHorton! I'm so glad you enjoyed my stories!