dkstories Posted July 17, 2004 Share Posted July 17, 2004 Okay, I'd posted the original version of this story to a very select group of people about a year ago. I've posted a few chapters in the sneak peak area, and from the feedback I've gotten, decided to go ahead and release this story. It's a study of the anti-hero. As a human, Jarred is self-centered and arrogant. As a vampire, he's more self-centered and more arrogant. If I met Jarred in real life, I would run and never look back, praying I could get away in time. Whether he's a character you will enjoy and like...well we'll find out... Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 18, 2004 Author Share Posted July 18, 2004 Thanks, BM. There should be four more chapters coming up soon, so I hope everyone enjoys them. As soon as Myr gets them posted... One thing some readers of DoT will find is that there are similarities between Jarred's familiar(s) and Dylan's circle. Well, there's a reason for that...The concept of Dylan's abilities, and his circle, were BASED on what I'd developed for the vampiric familiars in this story. Although this story is actually being given to you AFTER Dawn of Tears, it actually predates DoT by about 8 months. Obviously there are massive difference between Dylan's circle and what you'll see with vampire familiars, but the core essence of what they are and how they work first came from the vampire story. I hope others enjoy as well...like I said before...it can get pretty sadistic at times. If you want to see how sick and perverted I can be when I'm really upset and pissed off...well you'll see it here. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 18, 2004 Author Share Posted July 18, 2004 And Myr's said he's got the new chapters posted. Way to go Myr! Thanks. Link to comment
Gentim Posted July 19, 2004 Share Posted July 19, 2004 I hate to ask this: but where have the new chapters been posted to? I can't seem to find them. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 19, 2004 Author Share Posted July 19, 2004 https://www.gayauthors.org/dkstories/vampire/index.html That's where they'll be posted. The story page only has it as a very small link after the HP stories because we don't have a button for it yet. I'll unless another couple of chapters here pretty soon for your enjoyment. My editor just got done with editing some more chapters, and one thing he commented on is that I unfold more and more elements of the 'vampire' world (at least according to me) as the story itself unfolds. Here's a little secret for you readers as well...not everythign Jarred thinks he knows is accurate. He's got a few surprises coming for him... I'm glad to hear BM likes it, and I hope Gentim does once he reads the chapters up, but what about the rest of y'all? Link to comment
BillM Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 Hmmm... I can't see chapter 3 for some reason Dan, all I get is a blank page Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 20, 2004 Author Share Posted July 20, 2004 Hmm, I got that problem too. I've re-checked the file and resent it to Myr. He should fix it as soon as he sees it. He's damn good at stuff like that. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 20, 2004 Author Share Posted July 20, 2004 Chapter 3 is fixed. Sorry about that guys. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 Two more chapters posted...hope to hear how y'all think of the story as it picks up a bit. Link to comment
BillM Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 You've got a very dirty mind Dan Nice work, lol! Link to comment
Gentim Posted July 22, 2004 Share Posted July 22, 2004 I second BM's comment. Dan, you've definitely got a dirty mind. I've got to say that the story has definitely grabbed my attention! Keep the chapters cumming. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 22, 2004 Author Share Posted July 22, 2004 I second BM's comment. Dan, you've definitely got a dirty mind. I've got to say that the story has definitely grabbed my attention! Keep the chapters cumming. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, I did try to warn people that it wasn't quite like anything else I've ever written...and stems from frustration and anger. Now, I'll be posting some more chapters soon, but I've been typing on Dawn of Tears today (yay! I got past my block on how to figure out a plot point!). Later on I might even start a poll about some of the characters in Vampire Jarred though...have some fun with the story... Link to comment
Forloyn Posted July 22, 2004 Share Posted July 22, 2004 may haps it's supost to be this was but there is no https://www.gayauthors.org/dkstories/dawn.html but then maybe your supost to die to a 404 page seeing how the page is called dawn and we are reading about vampires... all links that "Back to Main Story Page" on the VJ story link to the deadly dawn page... my back button got a workout! Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 23, 2004 Author Share Posted July 23, 2004 may haps it's supost to be this was but there is nohttps://www.gayauthors.org/dkstories/dawn.html but then maybe your supost to die to a 404 page seeing how the page is called dawn and we are reading about vampires... all links that "Back to Main Story Page" on the VJ story link to the deadly dawn page... my back button got a workout! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> woops, I thought I fixed that...*sigh*. It's my fault. I copied the links over from the Dawn HTML. I'll fix it with future chapters. Link to comment
dkstories Posted July 24, 2004 Author Share Posted July 24, 2004 The link has been fixed, and two new chapters of Vampire Jarred are posted. Plus, I got my first e-mail on the story! Link to comment
Forloyn Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 ... you left me hanging there... Link to comment
ethan thorn Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 well i would not say dirty as much as i would evil and twisted much like my self guess that is why i like it so much it is something a long the lines of what i would write if i could but i dont think anyone would want to read something that looked like it was one thought or one sentence but the way i think about stuuf like that i guess comes from being a live action role player i have had a lot of games this dark that woudl make great storys but i now see way a dark harry potter is so easy for dan it so nice to read somehting that is so close to what the real vampire world would be like if it was real thank you dan. Link to comment
Site Administrator Myr Posted August 26, 2004 Site Administrator Share Posted August 26, 2004 New chapter up Link to comment
Theoddguy Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 Hello.I just finished reading chapter 10 of 'Vampire Jarred'.I personally love vampire stories,and found your take on vampires very interesting. I love your Jarred char,and I have to say my favorite 'familiar' char is Jimmy.I just love those baseball uniforms. Great story!!Im looking forward to reading more soon. Link to comment
dkstories Posted August 30, 2004 Author Share Posted August 30, 2004 Thanks guys! FYI - Chapter 11 is now posted! Enjoy as the plot thickens! Link to comment
BillM Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 Can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment
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