davewri
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“Holy shit! So he is a Billionaire?” Louis responded in shock, After some 18 months together Louis finally discovers that these people are wealthy. Private jets and luxury yachts might have been a clue.
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We will see
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Every good story has a little drama....just like real life.
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Will Hawkins said: the near destruction of the support of the school over one student's errors was a little too much. A personal squabble between two students does not warrant such a destructive response. It only gives Xander more of a feeling of how special he thinks he is.
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Chas might have feelings for Xander, but Xander has issues.
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Xander once again has no self control and little respect for others.
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Once someone shows any slight interest, Xander will push him away. Homophobia?
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Please keep this young man safe. Hope there are no accidents and hospital visits. We need a happy story this time.
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Devon is a complete narcissist who only cares about what makes him comfortable. He will continue to run and hide with no regard of the feelings of others..... I expect he will soon turn on his twin brothers if they do or say something he does not like.
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I agree. The main characters are always running and hiding.
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Devon is being a jerk. Perhaps some medical condition related to his head injury.
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Devon has a problem with seeing naked men. He is also overly harsh regarding the way he speaks to Edgar.
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Devon has a problem with the naked body?
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My feelings also. Waiting for a happy story with a happy ending.
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What you are trying to say is that Trenton is selfish and does not treat Travis as an equal. More drama to come on that front.
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Running, hiding and avoiding the press. What is Devon really afraid of?
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Is this is a revision of the story that was previously posted?
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At times Trenton is unduly abrupt and arrogant. Not a warm hearted person at all.
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Rather cold and nasty to Travis. A partner or servant?
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Esky = foam cooler. Shortened generic slang from the Eskimo Brand named cooler.
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I have always looked forward to my weekly dose of good reading and story telling. Thank you for the effort and tenacity to produce this worthwhile epic story.
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I assumed that an island is indeed in the ocean.....https://www.google.com/maps/@-31.9933097,115.646196,48679m/data=!3m1!1e3
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18-20 kilometers west of Perth
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What did he inherit and why are the bad guys after him?
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Always a surprise when you find out your parents are human and were once teenagers.
