davewri
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Never wise to disrespect contractors. Never know what surprises they could leave.
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What were they thinking? It would take a lot of very high priced charters to pay back 12,000,000. That is above the salaries and operational cost so it makes it a foolish idea. Star struck by a few royal celebrities but no promise of continuing at that level. Very few would be chartering the new, larger ship. Wise of the family to shoot this idea down.
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Typical for these people. Running away is a common theme here.
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Anton ran far away like a little punk based on part of a phone call to Mathew. Without any word from Mathew he assumes the worst. If Mathew was drugged and raped, he deserved some concern from Anton. Quoka sure writes some awkward character development.
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Only a matter of time before Carlton gets upset over something silly and runs away.
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So very typical of all of Quoka's stories. Main character runs away and leaves everyone who cares about him in misery.
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As usual Anton totally disregards the people that love and care about him. Preferring to ride horses and neglect people that are worried about him.
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Nothing new here. Quoka's characters are almost all smart mouthed punks. No regard for other peoples feelings is a familiar theme in all of his writings. I read these stories because they are somewhat interesting. Quoka does not write warm and fuzzy love stories.
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Chapters at out of sequence. Still no answer about the accident.
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Seems we missed the whole scene about an accident. Poor Mathew has been disposed of like an old newspaper.
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Could not really be called a cliff hanger when they are sitting on the bottom of the ocean. LOL
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Typical reaction for all of Quoka's stories.
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Once again Quoka has let his main character explode and run off to hide. Mathew was drugged and possibly raped and Anton the person that is supposed to be his partner, hangs up and runs away Never seeks a reason or try to understand anything he just runs away. Leaves his phone behind so that people who do care for him are left to suffer and wonder why. A very overworked and very familiar theme.
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I think it is the author who has issues. The same theme appears in all of his writings.
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"Reporters" don't trash rooms like that. If the old biker gang joined the striking truckers it could get very ugly.
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Happened to me once. Went home with a guy from the bar. Did all the wild and crazy things. About 2:00 he told me I had to leave because his boyfriend he had been fighting with would be coming back home soon. I waited in the parking lot until I saw a guy pull up. I waved and smiled as he passed by.
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Anton quite often makes rash, quick decisions. Does he not understand "due diligence" ?
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Crossing a truck drivers strike could be a problem.
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Anton has a boyfriend, Anton has a boyfriend, Anton has a boyfriend. My have times changed.
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God how I hate hospital waiting rooms. They should hand out sedatives for people waiting.
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Quoka's early writing has a lot of tedious descriptions of every mundane thing in great detail. Have patience it gets better.
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Quokka, you seem to have a problem writing about gay characters. The stories are interesting and I have read them all. This is a gay authors web site after all.
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Still not resolved on the gay issue. Somewhere deep inside the truth will have to come out.
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Typical of Quoka's writing style to show very little love or closeness. I see hugs at the airport all the time. Never too old for a hug.
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Do you still have that copy of the photograph?” More danger coming I bet.
