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    NB Chapter 7

    Why is he so afraid of Sebastian that he would travel halfway around the world to avoid a phone call?
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    NB Chapter 6

    A rather severe over reaction. I bet Sebastian has words with that captain on how to treat guests on his ship. So far I do like this story and hope Huon and Sebastian meet and work out what ever it is Sebastian is intending. Huon seems very self absorbed about keeping his singing a secret and his reluctance in dealing with Sebastian on a reasonable level.
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    FR Chapter 41

    About Sara....If something is too good to be true. .... I suspect a tracking device has been placed on board. Simon and Anton will not have a romantic connection. Quokka does not write gay stories.
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    FR Chapter 32

    Quokka stories don't have much about gay relationships. It's obvious there is something about Simon's attraction to Anton, but nothing will happen in this story.
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    FS Chapter 22

    Either a tracking device or a spy within the unit.
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    FS Chapter 18

    "I see two men, dressed in dark clothing, they took off for cover, as soon as the outside lights came on" From chapter 17
  7. I have a feeling that Granger will be on this ship a lot longer and he might be sent off on a special mission. Just guessing.
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    FR Chapter 22

    Maybe should have done that background check on Mr. Kingsley before rather than after ..............
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    FR Chapter 4

    Father might have had a tracking device planted onboard. Sounds like an evil man.
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    UF Chapter 2

    This story was posted before. Is this a rewrite or updated version?
  11. davewri

    UF Chapter 1

    This story was posted before. Is this a rewrite or updated version?
  12. davewri

    Chapter 41

    I have had a lot of Texas chili and it can be really explosive at times.
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    August 2014

    Really good chapter.
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    Chapter 44

    Thank you for this early Christmas present. Welcome back.
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    Chapter 39

    Stef is beginning to be a suspect in "Who is the Black Widow". Not understanding Stef and the way he is acting towards Will.
  16. Dear Mark, I have been cautious to check in on the story status because I was afraid of finding bad news. So sorry to hear your illness. I am also dealing with some cancer related issues. The scariest thing I ever heard from my doctor was when he said he was referring me to an ONCOLOGIST. I have a very rare case of Basal Cell Carcinoma where a small, neglected Basal cell skin cancer decided to go internal and take out all the lymph nodes for my right shoulder and right arm. Surgery was four years ago and I still feel like crap. Serious disruption of the lymph system, borderline lymphoma. Treatments and medicine have left me pretty much as you about libido, not sexually interested so much anymore. When I read stories online I just skim over the sex scenes and look for the story content. Good writing and good characters don't always need hard core sex. Wishing you the best and know that you have a lot of concerned readers that care about you. David W.
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    Chapter 30

    Perhaps the plane crash was not an accident. Is the work of the Black Widow?
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    Chapter 29

    I smell trouble. His name is Buzz.
  19. I really, really like this story. Great characters and good writing.
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    Chapter 23

    This story is just now getting to the best part. Mark is at his best in the total destruction of enemies.
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    Chapter 21

    Two servings of delicious Mark Arbour stories. What a Thanksgiving treat . Thanks Mark!
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    Chapter 40

    Thank you for this wonderful Thanksgiving surprise. Since they are on water I can't call this a cliffhanger.........
  23. I am now checking for story postings only once a day. This is way down from the previous hourly checks.
  24. Can't wait to get into Winter. This is a refreshingly good story and I eagerly anticipate the next season.
  25. We would love to have ay least two chapters a week. I really love this story and I have fallen in love with CJ.
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