davewri
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Sorry to be such a downer on these plans. Extreme fire escape safety danger with all the windows and doors blocked. Sounds more like a jail than it should .
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The Granger family name is very intriguing in this saga.
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Am I the only one that finds all of this terribly confusing? I need a diagram of all the players and their positions.
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Old saying "If you can see the river, the river can also see you."
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A quick ending to an unfinished story.
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My family certainly has a few issues. Most of them will never be put to rest until we are all dead and buried. I learned long ago not to go to family gatherings...……..
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Usually there is calm after the storm....maybe the storm is just getting started.
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Why live in a house that you know for certain is prone to flooding? Must be other nice houses in London. Drama alert!
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Never good to have the police angry at you. 😒
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Sounds like time for a re-write is what I was about to say.
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No wonder the poor kid ran away. Poor excuse for both parents.
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And he turned off his phone. Something missing here.
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Lot of time wasted and seems very little effort to locate his missing son.
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Nothing ever stays settled in Quokkaland for very long.
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As began reading it seemed familiar. Was a good story before and now that it's been edited it will be well worth reading again.
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Sometimes it is hard to tell...…….
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He will always be an arrogant jerk, nothing new here.
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In case of emergency a blocked cell phone is a bad idea.
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Cell phone jamming is highly illegal.
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It would be nice to know something about the graduation party. So much was written about the event planning and then an abrupt end of the story. As readers we deserve better.
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A swarm of graduating high school students onboard almost guarantees some drama to come.
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“Holy shit! So he is a Billionaire?” Louis responded in shock, After some 18 months together Louis finally discovers that these people are wealthy. Private jets and luxury yachts might have been a clue.
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We will see
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Every good story has a little drama....just like real life.
