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    Chapter 30

    I thought there was a lot of reward money coming for discovering the fraud on the invoices.
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    Chapter 22

    Thankfully this is not the real world. It's the world the author made for us. A little diversion for this pandemic nightmare.
  3. "and don’t worry, all will be fine" somehow I don't think that will be the case. this story needs some drama.
  4. Marcus must be more than just a casual friend
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    Chapter 10

    Love a happy ending!
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    Chapter 6

    This is very much a mystery. Mark is not what he seems. "If it's too good to be true" .....
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    Chapter 22

    Some day in the far future there will be much written about the events of 2020. I hope that writer will be as eloquent as you are Mister Arbour. Take care.
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    Chapter 5

    I think grandfather might know Mark's family.
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    Chapter 2

    The pistol was a Smith and Wesson 38 Special revolver. Do folks in UK even have those?
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    Chapter 2

    I remember many years ago when we got our first refrigerator with an ice maker. My father went into the kitchen in the early morning hours with his pistol drawn.
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    The Visitors

    Deja vu all over again?
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    Dr Chapter 10

    Fully expect some nautical drama soon.
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    Alo Chapter 1

    Mexico is also a part of North America.
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    DSA Chapter 16

    Must be a sequel coming. One suspicious person caught the eye which leads me to hope for more of this story.
  15. Always make your first shot count.
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    DSA Chapter 9

    I am here today to clear up some miss information
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    DSA Chapter 9

    Editor was sleeping on this chapter ...........Still a good story.
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    DSA Chapter 8

    “I only asked you sir, as you are first,” the officer said, as he signalled a colleague to join him, “My friend here speaks very little English, he is still learning,” I explained. Trouble coming so soon?
  19. Trouble brewing.
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    DSA Chapter 3

    I am sure the family will get a huge reward. Also love is in the air...........
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    Late Lunch

    Two chapters and over 100 comments. Everyone begging for more is a good sign.
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    Late Lunch

    l gladly read everything you post. (My personal preference is a long chapter every day)
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    Shad Chapter 12

    Never understood the fear and aversion to the media. Answer a few questions and they will move on to the next story.
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    Shad Chapter 7

    Something not quite right about all of this. 👀
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    Shad Chapter 6

    Is this a good place for Tobias? Lots of drama with all the shouting and fighting.
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