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Damien is going to get his ass kicked by a long list of people.
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Lot of questions about this story.
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Second guess ….Mount Magnet is one of the Mid West region’s original gold mining towns, and the longest surviving gold mining settlement in Western Australia.
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My guess is on opal.
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Such homophobia points back to Harrison's probable suppressed true nature.
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Coral Coast Station was bad news from start to finish. Time to settle down with his family.
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Maybe the new mysterious royal visitor?
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Possible that one of those people Lloyd has dealt with might come back and hurt him? Making that many people angry will cause trouble.
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Heartless to evict a family without really knowing the whole story. Then dumping them at the church and driving away. Gave a big donation to people that cleaned his house but nothing to help the poor family. Heartless and cruel is typical Lloyd behavior.
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Jeremy and Angela were disappointed that Lloyd gave them a cold reception. Did they expect he would offer to hire them?
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In the real world people say and do things we might not expect them to do. Placing our own thoughts and desires on other people. Keep writing this excellent saga just as you have been.
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This chapter much too calm. Waiting for the next disaster. 😎
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"Like most of your stories, the main guy goes from one crisis to another" But we still like these stories😉
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The title of the story "All Alone" says lot.
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As usual, Lloyd is running away and being a jerk. Turns off his phone and does not try to communicate. He is punishing Angela and Jeremy after he secretly took over their property.
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Lloyd bought the loan on the property and has put up his own investment money. Nicholas has a lot to worry about.
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Lewis tends to over react to everything.
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Sad to see Sebastian killed off. Was not expecting that.
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Now we can start to worry about the implications of the title of this series.
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Why no satellite phone in this chapter? Used a lot in previous trips. Did someone forget about sat phones?
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Waiting for "national security" issues. Good story so far.
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Still waiting for anything related to "national security".
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I guess we have to wait for the wedding.
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"I made an unusual request, asking him to make a steel ring" A wedding coming soon?
