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I expect plenty of alcohol and vitriol at the reception.
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A possible plot twist: “Will Susannah be joining us there?” JJ had spent pretty much all of his time with her since he’d met her. Alex didn’t seem put off with that at all, which surprised me a bit. “That’s the plan,” he replied.
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Welcome back Mark and team. I always enjoy each chapter and this is one of the good ones. A lot of loose ends tied up. Missed Cody, he could be a series by himself. Can't wait for the JJ explosion soon to come.
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Good to see you again Mark. We have all been patiently waiting for the continuation of Streak. We thank you for all the good writing you have so generously given us. So how about a chapter or two of Granger?
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I was frequently in the bath houses of Houston and Los Angeles so I can relate to some of this. If I could rewind those years, maybe not the smartest thing to do. Looking back I realize how lucky I am not to be a medical statistic. Will be interesting to see how you tie the raunchy sex party to the story line.
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Life happens to all of us. Thank you for all that you have given us so far. Tons and tons of high quality writing has taken a big chunk out of your time and we do appreciate that. Good to know that it's not a health issue.
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The redheaded stranger? I hear Willie Nelson in my head.
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Chapter 7: Telepathy and Cartels
davewri commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 7: Telepathy and Cartels
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Take care of Mark first. We can wait, not patiently, but we can wait. Life happens and you deal with it. Just know how much we appreciate all that you have given us. We will be here when you post again. We do understand that these stories are not the priority of your life.
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Poor little JJ had unhappy birthdays because he pushed everyone away all year. JJ has matured a lot in the past few chapters and might someday be almost a nice person. We all thank you Mark. We appreciate every little morsel we get and are just being greedy to expect more. Now how about some of our favorite nautical story?
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Mark, your writing ability is without question. The way you set a scene and the nuances of the situation are superb. One of the best writers I have had the joy of reading. But please, please don't write any more about the joys of straight sex. Takes me back to college days when I tried to prove to myself that I wouldn't really know if I was gay until I dove into a vagina. Never again, never again. JJ is a very mixed up young man.
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Mark you are truly on your game with this chapter. Who else could speak with Nelson in this manner? Bravo! (Wish someone would give me a lovely midshipman)
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I did not see this three way marriage as a solution. JJ thinks about women more than men when he masturbates (w t f) Once again Mark has twisted the plot.
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It is utterly futile to anticipate how Mark Arbour's devious mind will resolve this mess with Alex and JJ. Hang on for a few more chapters and all will be sorted. Maybe.
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More, more, more! Quickly please. You can't leave us on the edge of this cliff very long. We all knew you would deliver us a Thanksgiving delight. This is a really big deal for JJ. Please don't kill JJ!
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I see rainbows and fields of clover. Unicorns are prancing around with the newborn colts. And I see dark clouds over the horizon. Bring it on Mark, we are all waiting for it. So much happiness and relief in this chapter makes me wonder what happens next.
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Will is always going to be Will. Why do some people expect he could radically change? His character is essential to the whole story. He hits the nail on the head with this line to Wally: "When he wins the MVP award in a Super Bowl, you want him to tell the press that he owes it all to you." I am firmly in the " I love Will " side of this. Thanks for starting the New Year with a good, full chapter of Will.
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Wally wants Zach to be in the NFL and make lots of money. His constant nagging and criticism is his twisted way of motivating Zach. Wally failed in football so he is living vicariously thru Zach. I think Wally would never go public about Zach's sexuality because he hopes Zach will become a star player. Someone he could brag about to his friends.
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Always looking for clues.........Will the dentist in Zach's past show up in the visit to Claremont?
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Thank you Mark for this early Christmas present. Granger is my favorite of all your characters. Merry Christmas to everyone on the Mark Arbour team :rolleyes:
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Speaking of religious zealots... Wonder how the 'counsellor' would stand up to a strict application of Biblical law?
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I'm beginning to like Marc. I believe Will would have picked up any indication that Marc wasn't genuine. Marc is lucky if he is brought into this family and his former friend should be afraid, very afraid. Brad will step on David like a cockroach if thinks he needs it. Time for Zach to get his emancipation lawyer. His parents might try to kidnap him and take him to one of those 'reorientation' centers.
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With the East Coast/ West Coast time difference we can actually have two Thanksgiving dinner events. My bet is on Goodwell and the main attraction will be JJ. The second round at Escorial will have to be a really explosive revelation about Marc to top the diva's response to Mary Ellen.
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I just love how Mark is setting all of this up. I still say it's too good to be true. Probably after Marc's first formal dinner at Escorial, they will all go outside, sit by a fire, smoke a few joints and sing. "Someone's crying, Lord, Kum ba yah! O Lord, Kum ba yah" Waiting for a lot of shoes to start dropping.
