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  1. andy cannon
    Decisions, decisions!
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    Uncles

    andy cannon commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Uncles

    Colic is a serious and mysterious affliction. I worked with a woman years ago whose daughter screamed inconsolably for hours every night for months. The mom walked around like a zombie from the lack of sleep. Stopped as suddenly as it began.
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    Great start! I like River already and am pulling for him. Zayn, on the other hand, will have to do a lot of work to win me over!
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    Chapter 1

    andy cannon commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is a great story, but now I have questions. Cooper broke down crying when telling why he was in the Catskills, which I can understand if he were innocent, but since he was guilty was he just manipulating Izzy into believing him? Also while Cooper is in prison, Izzy sells the general store. It wasn't an FBI front, but a legitimate business? Was FBI agent a side gig for Izzy?
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    Great chapter!
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    Chapter 8

    andy cannon commented on and9993's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Becky's loss is Andrew's gain. Connor is training him well.
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    WOW! This just keeps getting better!
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    Friends & Brothers

    andy cannon commented on Celian's story chapter in Friends & Brothers

    Another great chapter!
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    Safe and Kind

    andy cannon commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Safe and Kind

    The demon told it like it was, most of the time. That's the problem with demons all of the time.
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    Chapter 1

    andy cannon commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great start! I can already tell that Creek will be a fantastic Dad.
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    Game Over

    andy cannon commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Game Over

    A beautiful, bittersweet ending to a great story,
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    Chapter 1

    andy cannon commented on Edged Bound's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great start! Sebastian can use a little good fortune it sounds like. I can't wait to hear Shaun's story.
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    Sober Dexter seems competent and likeable. The questions now are can he get the help he needs to stay that way, and can Reese help him turn the restaurant around? The œufs au plat bressanne sounds wonderful!
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    Another great chapter. The restaurant business is brutal, with low margins for profit and the reliance on customer's good perception to survive. The downgrade by Michelin was possibly accompanied by a rash of negative Yelp reviews that could be difficult to overcome for an establishment with slipping standards and what appears to be a consciously old-fashioned menu. I am fascinated by the well-written story.
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    Watching someone spiral out of control like that is painful. I am looking forward to this story.
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    Featherless

    andy cannon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Featherless

    Lyrical and moving!
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    Chapter 11

    andy cannon commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 11

    The play-by-play of the baseball is very vivid and well done!
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    Great story! I thought checking into a French hotel sounded difficult, then the French medical system showed up!
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    Poor Rory! having to live with such a horse's patoot for a father.
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    An interesting take.
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    Calvin is all too aware of the effect he has on "Masey-boy" and is playing him like a fine violin at this point.
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    Will Mason spontaneously combust the first time roomie Calvin walks out of the shower with just a towel wrapped around his waist,,, and the towel 'accidentally' drops? I'm staying tuned to find out!
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    An intriguing start. I look forward to seeing how a submissive top is developed.
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    A really nice chapter with deliberate pacing, a slow burn all the through with increasing sexual tension. Matthijs is playing a long game, I think, about 3 or4 moves ahead of Åke, with an intriguing ambiguity washing over all the action.
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    Chapter 1

    andy cannon commented on Gary L's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A really fantastic character-driven story. Jack’s interior monologue is convincing: self-loathing, bargaining with self, the cycle of shame and desire, and the description “a pastiche cavern from a B grade horror film” perfectly captures the seediness of many uni gay venues.
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