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  1. Toast

    Gal Pals

    I had to google siomai. Philippine siomai Siomai (Cebuano/Tagalog: siyomay) in the Philippines is often ground pork, beef, shrimp, among others, combined with extenders like green peas, carrots and the like which is then wrapped in wonton wrappers. It is either steamed or fried resulting in a crispy exterior. It is normally dipped in soy sauce and squeezed calamondin, and for some, with an oily, spicy garlic mix. So, now I am hungry for more of your story and some siomai.
  2. Happy Birthday Andy !
  3. Happy Birthday Velefried !
  4. Happy Birthday Patrick !
  5. Happy Birthday Frostina !
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    Turning Corners

    The charm and appeal of this story has me hooked.
  7. Happy Birthday ! Ryan Jo ! ♥
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    Farewell

    There is a fondness in farewell or at least I think that way Even for the demons that find those cracks
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    Chapter 5

    lol, I remembered Mercury and Bromine, but none of the others I even remembered. I like Gibby.
  10. I love the way you are telling this. I want chapter six.
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    Chapter 4

    Completely enjoyed the first four and look forward to more, I hope soon
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    Chapter 3

    The forced intimacy of the prison cell is forging a friendship, I want to see where this all goes.
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    Chapter 3

    It's a cosmic law of the universe that you get punked by someone named Amanda. Another chapter I enjoyed.
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    Chapter 2

    The writing is excellent, you create great rapport with the reader.
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    Chapter 1

    A tragic past and a picture perfect new place to try to begin again. This holds great promise.
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    Chapter 2

    It is feelings and intelligence that bridge the gaps between these two. Differences only underline the obvious that their association is not going to be typical.
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    Chapter 1

    I read Hyperion. I like this first chapter. Good start.
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    Honesty?

    This is great.
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    Chapter 7

    1313 Buford Road was the address of Friday’s Pawn and Junk It. Believe it or not, this was the same address I had written down a few hours before at my desk while I was thinking or obsessing over recent events for the hundredth time… kind of lost in the past. Ty had suggested trying the phone number. I agreed, it was time to put aside assessments and do something, even follow up a mysterious address. The phone did ring, but there was no answer… not even an answering service. Ty then suggested a
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    Is it okay?

    I just think this is so good.
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    Perfection

    Terrific, I really like it.
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    I'm Dead

    I enjoyed this first chapter very much.
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    Prologue

    Nice writing.
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    Encounters

    Really good chapter! Please continue soon.
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    Shopping Trip

    Enjoying the story and discovering the history of the Barrett? family.
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