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Toast

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  1. The possibilities in poetry are endless. And touchingly intimate. The hints of understanding and acceptance. It is our souls and art. Enjoyed the experience.
  2. Toast

    Chapter 1

    You left us with a cliffhanger. That is a good sign. I hope you continue this, because I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps the Fades turn out to have a purpose.
  3. Toast

    Chapter 1

    Very clever and caught my attention. Liked the verbal exchange. Would like to hear more.
  4. I envy your story delivery, so smooth. I recommend it be read just to enjoy that. But it is a good story too. The lovemaking was well done to say the least.
  5. Hey Bill, please republish your story here. I am still reading the anthology and I want to read all of them. What makes GA wonderful is all our efforts. Don't pull back now, please continue.
  6. See you when you get back home here on GA.
  7. Toast

    Chapter 1

    I really loved this, a good read, oh heck a superior read. The like will follow soon.
  8. Toast

    Story

    I enjoyed reading your story.
  9. Wonderfully done, a life distilled into a final plea.
  10. Toast

    Drunk Enough

    A fun read, kind of an elopement surprise for everyone.
  11. Toast

    Chapter 1

    This was nicely done, you young scoundrel !
  12. Toast

    Ashton's Place

    I love your writing, tight and cohesive, every word and action performing magic. Taking us with you on your adventure. Really enjoyed reading this and wish it was more.
  13. Toast

    Chapter 1

    Well, thank god for Andrea or it may have taken another year for these two to get together. Enjoyed your story.
  14. A diary of memories reviewed for a private introspection of mind, heart and soul. Enjoyed reading this. Difficult questions asked.
  15. Toast

    Chapter 1

    Well, the rain sucked me in with only the one word. I love this kind of writer confidence. You see it all the way thru the story. Enjoyed reading !
  16. Happy Birthday, Talon Rider !
  17. Happy Birthday, little Panya! and ♥
  18. Happy Birthday!
  19. A Valentine in November By bugeye Like most days… it was a good day and a bad day… if you were of a philosophical mind. Sometimes, I wonder if I have one. A mind that is. The ground beyond was almost orange, covered in a carpet of leaves. The tall hardwoods, half bare and bark gray against the brilliant blue sky, swaying. The graceful procession of palladian windows framed life as the beautiful miracle we were supposed to believe it to be. Well, at least the view was. The vaulted ceiling
  20. A little tale of serendipity and misfortune.
  21. Good luck with this endeavor and congratulations. It is only the beginning of greater things for you.
  22. Toast

    Chapter 3

    Andrew is being very guarded, like someone under a lot of pressure for reasons we don't know yet.
  23. You put that well.
  24. Happy Birthday! Tim! ♥
  25. Happy Birthday Mikie
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