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    James Place

    Man! You didn't stop it there? Really had a great time reading this, hope it has a follow-up.
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    Chapter 19

    Okay, please give me chapter twenty.
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    Insomnia

    I really like the last stanza. The painting is marvelous.
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    Chapter 13

    Duke, I love your story!
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    Chapter 11

    I am having just a good time reading this I should go back and say that over and over for each chapter!
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    Chapter 7

    I am enjoying your story. This chapter was fabulous .
  7. I had to google hot box. I love to disapprove of these people.
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    the beast

    Words are powerful things. Strong poem.
  9. You write the extreme mean very well.
  10. Every time I read a new chapter, I fall for the story all over again.
  11. Happy Birthday Fishy! Have a wonderful day!
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    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed reading this. A small slice of life. With a big impact.
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    Chapter 1

    WHISPER by bugeye Slowly and carefully, with one step… pause… then another step, Whisper, confidently as possible breathed his way across his studio. There was only so much revivification could do for him now. He had his extra forty years. Now he was about done, with living at least. Much like a living statue, he would continue to stiffen until the end. Now he crossed his forgotten studio in stops and starts. What an empty joke that was. He and his studio had ended up
  14. One of those moments when you take a look.
  15. I just started your story, but I want to hear more about the voodoo girl.
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    Chapter 13

    I enjoyed your story, I hope you write another.
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    Chapter 12

    I loved this puppy chapter!
  18. I am glad you are writing more. And I admire how you always take the time to remember others and applaud their work.
  19. Because you have a good heart. I took care of my parents for ten years. Things rarely went as planned. I know that is a poor comfort. At the end you know you went the distance. It is a hard path. Believe in you.
  20. You're a wonderful guy Kevin.
  21. Happy Birthday Kevin! ♥ ♥ Happy Birthday Kevin! ♥ ♥ Dear Friend! ♥ ♥ Dear Friend!
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    Poem, 5.19.11

    Thanks for reading and a review. Sorry to be late with my thank you, I tend to hide from my poems after they are done.
  23. I want to know how Charles died. And is the wedding postponed now for England or a quickie on the ship home.
  24. I think Jenny is going to kick James' butt one day. Or hit him over the head with a shovel. Maybe the elder Charles preferred to die this way. In a fight.
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    Wales

    Looks enchanting.
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