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  1. Happy Birthday! BeeBee! Sweet Sixteen! I do believe.
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    Unaware

    I enjoyed reading your short story.
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    Moon Square Venus

    I guess wonderful and brilliant sound empty, but it's my attempt at saying how much I liked this.
  4. Happy Birthday Chase, come say hi.
  5. Happy Birthday Special One.
  6. Happy Birthday! Cammy!
  7. Question 1 = Autumn Question 2 = Lightning Storm Question 3 = Love Castles, Like Quests Question 4 = Dang, I want both but Chariot Question 5 = Lightmaking Question 6 = Fleetness of the foot Question 7 = Luck Question 8 = Knowing your friends Question 9 = The ancient and knowing Nile Question 10 = Wisdom is correct knowledge correctly applied Question 11 = Old and experienced Question 12 = A great imperial capital city of murder, intrigue and fortune
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    Chapter 1

    I found much to enjoy in your story, I am glad I read it.
  9. Happy Birthday Steve! Our Buckaroo!
  10. Happy Birthday, again Audi!
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    Not A Legend

    Thanks for your poem, I enjoyed reading it.
  12. I like that Speciosus holds steadfast to his own self in the face of all creation it seems. Good story.
  13. Thanks for the nice. A novice writer, more like. Yes, I do like being the star narrator. I often possess my characters. Yes, I imply lots of things in the story without much explanation. I could tell you things, but then, you would not think of things yourself. The story is set at the end of Whisper's life. What is genius and why sometimes is it productive. In my own mind, all thirteen paintings are of Sigh. Maybe what Whisper captures is frozen despite being endless. A song that lives on and is sung many times, many ways, in many hearts.
  14. Good to hear from you. Always enjoy your comments. Glad life is good and interesting there.
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    Short Story

    Great fun. Good story.
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    Chapter 1

    Words like legend are only echos of words like father, son.
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    Chapter 1

    Poor Jordan, I hope Sebastian gets heart burn. Enjoyed.
  18. Good story.
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    James Place

    Man! You didn't stop it there? Really had a great time reading this, hope it has a follow-up.
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    Chapter 19

    Okay, please give me chapter twenty.
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    Insomnia

    I really like the last stanza. The painting is marvelous.
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    Chapter 13

    Duke, I love your story!
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    Chapter 11

    I am having just a good time reading this I should go back and say that over and over for each chapter!
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    Chapter 7

    I am enjoying your story. This chapter was fabulous .
  25. I had to google hot box. I love to disapprove of these people.
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