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    Chapter 10

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I'm glad Stefan is turning out to be good guy. And I like that JP struggles and has his own moments of doubt.
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    The Outside

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in The Outside

    Very nice, I enjoyed reading this.
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    Chapter 9

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 9

    What a damn good chapter.
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    Thank you, I don't know how you found this. I thought it was hidden well. Thanks.
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    Poem, 3.7.11

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, 3.7.11

    Thanks Mark for taking time to read and review. It means a lot to me that you did.
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    Chapter 8

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Yes, I am of course still reading. If I don't review every chapter, know I will be giving out lots of reps because it is so good and I am enjoying it very much.
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    4.7.11 and 5.8.11

    Toast posted a story in Poetry

    Just another reason.
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    __________4.7.11 and 5.8.11 __________bye bugeye __________Thoughts about a conversation __________Lost somewhere __________Along the time of a regret __________Left alone __________In plain sight __________Easy to ignore __________And never to be revisited __________All my favorite words __________Were used __________Like an old player piano __________That pla
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Happy Birthday Patrick!
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    Happy Birthday you whippersnapper!
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    The first of many....

    Toast commented on Westie's blog entry in The River Song

    Happy Anniversary West and Paya!
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    Chapter 2

    Toast commented on sandboy's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I love the words in this chapter and the cadence of it. Nice, I like.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on sandboy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was infectious and I like the humor for all the perils of the situation. I am one who doesn't care if there are grammar problems etc. But you may need an editor my friend, good luck.
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    Birthday boy

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in Birthday boy

    Even in his reality and solitude, the poet stands tall, doesn't he.
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    Forum sigs...

    Toast commented on J.T.'s blog entry in Fixing My Destiny

    Well, fmd, yours looks tiny. <div><br></div><div><br></div><div>I like both too, I think you could use them in different circumstances. Cailen's has lots of panache. </div>
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    Chapter 6

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Flying off to Paris, all of a sudden, is very enticing, can we do that today? JP's remark about spending some time together with Andre before there lives separate seems to more of a truth than expected. I've noticed the story has two driving forces, if that is the right phrase, going on. The story plot and the sex plot. Do you see it that way? Of course they are melded but they are also very different. There is tension between the two and some conflict?
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    Welcome back Kevin. I think OZ is cooler than the US.
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    Chapter 5

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I always enjoyed going to NY. I like the relationship between JP and Billy. So I guess I have to read the next chapter to see where JP is going.
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    Chapter 4

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 4

    This was marvelous. So many details that ring in my memory. The car talk was great. I guess JP has a Pontiac Grand Prix cause I don't think the GTO was introduced yet? And an Oldsmobile, my aunt had one, she owned her own clothing production company, very rare for a woman back then. The Frank Lloyd Wright Prairie house. Gosh Mark I could talk about this chapter forever lol. I love it.
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    Chapter 6

    Toast commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Turning your mortal enemy into your lover is quite the trick. I am glad Michael got his jinni back and more.
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    Chapter 9: Fireworks

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 9: Fireworks

    This is quickly sinking into nightmare and madness. So, why am holding out for... in not revelation then redemption? Another gut turning chapter. Love it.
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    Musta been....

    Toast commented on Lugh's story chapter in Musta been....

    I hope everyone remembers to nominate "Musta Been" as Best Poem of 2011 when the time comes and the Awards are given.
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    Chapter 3

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 3

    This is a good read. So much so that all the layers and themes, that can stop you to think, are racing with the urge to get to the next word. I have been thinking of one theme at least prominent to me is, what is a man of character? Is JP a man of character? Is the reader meant to wrestle with this as JP seems to be doing?
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    Chapter 2

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 2

    You write full throttle. If there are dangerous curves ahead, you don't slow down. It's strange, I don't always agree, but I can't deny that I am in for the ride. A good chapter, excellent writing and I am almost dizzy.
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