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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    Here I go. I even found the flowers from Gareth 😎
  2. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    This is getting weirder and weirder. Matt is the best, who knew he was into a foursome,but then he was fine with Lynix. Speaking of Tofu, I have a package of bio Tofu in the fridge, which goes well with the broccoli from last week and I wonder if I still have my vegan cheese....ok I go cook.
  3. Kileoli

    Chapter 4

    I like Tyler, but he's getting too good, too booooring, acting like he knows what Taine needs and always being there. I would have filed 10 times for a divorce if I had a partner like that....except they can't, they're not married yet.
  4. Kileoli

    Chapter 3

    I feel im existing aggressively while lost and a baby Cecil? Oh no, there's nothing worse than a cursed diaper and sleepless night. I guess I'm too traumatized to read about baby eternal living humanoids
  5. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    You're horribly awesome, I'm not gonna look at red pens the same again.
  6. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I thought the German Tax and bureaucracy was bad, but I'm wondering what they do in Warwick that it turned out so in your story. I'm looking forward to Charlie's and Taylor's fight over Taine or we should start a Champaign #boyfriend4charlie. But honestly I can't imagine Taine in Florida.
  7. Kileoli

    Congress

    What? They have their own story? Then please write them! I have more cookies and I'm behaving 🍪🍪🍪 first, before I get out and haunt/ hunt you! Hhhmmm since they are private I don't want to know you suck on what/ at what?!? But Scott is a nice side character you created and he has a high potential in helping Gabriel, besides he takes interesting photos so Sean+Gabriel might want to be photographed by him for the invitation to their wedding 😂😉
  8. Kileoli

    Congress

    That's a lot of action, thinking about it we haven't heard of the senator at all
  9. Kileoli

    Congress

    I really liked the part about Michael, you did a good job showing his inner struggle to accept himself and what he was raised with. And thanks goodness he didn't do anything stupid and was so rational. You also get an extra 🍪 for not doing anything to Scott. Gabriel needs him. BTW who's Chris? Did I miss him?😱 Or is it DJ?
  10. Kileoli

    Congress

    So 9 to go, but if you keep on adding more sex scenes ( or did you lie about having no time for the sex anymore?!) then it's gonna be more than 22 chapters, just saying.
  11. Seriously you considered ending something with so much gossip potential? Good you didn't. 😎 It's so satisfying that Sky and Ryan talked finally, what worries me is that Sloane gets in trouble.
  12. Kileoli

    Revelry

    You're right. My bad, I didn't read properly. The guy did return everything. And it's a good thing you want to post frequently, it's no fun harassing you about new chapters since it doesn't work anyway.
  13. Kileoli

    Revelry

    It's so mean of you to get Gabriel drunk. I'm a bit worried about Scott, but worse is this mysterious guy rubbing poor Gabriel so he can't run away. The cross is definitely worth investigating though.
  14. To finish the foul task from his childhood, should Theodor kill Vee and Jack? And Cassandra wanted to get rid of Theo at all costs so was she trying to stop the stinky tree or are they in the same team destroying the wolves?
  15. You will be officially the most unique modest glitter-resistent gay guy. Thus you are allowed to take your kink secrets to the underworld, where you receive a glitter box in exchange of your secrets. May the gods of glitter and kink like you.
  16. How do you know that you're the most modest gay guy? Rick has a theory that such people do not exist. They just need to be introduced to the magical fountain of kinkiness. Liam used to be shy and turn 50 shades of pink thinking about stuff until Rick happened and rubbed his glitter in and on him. Now Liam writes freely about the next horrible position and puts the newest toys on his wishlist. Thanks to online shopping and the postman you can order things without anyone knowing, or do you have your in-laws who accidentally open your orders without looking carefully at the names?!😅😂
  17. Then I have to disappoint you, another chapter or two and you see how things fall apart.
  18. Kileoli

    Epiphany

    Wasn't Gabriel in Japan and messing with Yakuza? And what did that guy do to Scott? You can't simply kill him and throw him on the dumpster! I mean you did but why?!
  19. What was unfair? They had their fun 😂 The chapter was all the experiments went wrong or interrupted. And the bunny boo was the closest translation I found to Hasipupsi, as their safe word. If you have a better translation, I would like to know. And Liam would be happy to know what you wanna say, you can start with his method or his way of organizing the toys or if you have new suggestions he can try😂
  20. Thanks for the tip. Im gonna definitely use this.
  21. Kileoli

    Prologue

    A human eating plant as a pet, it's getting more and more interesting
  22. Seriously? Lol, so I was sorta right with my assumption then. At some point of the story I thought I don't know the bad guys, it sorta doesn't make sense, but honestly you made it sound like it was intentional to confuse the reader 😂
  23. Liam has no discipline 😉, he just gets obsessed with something and can't let go. His brain is a complete chaos and he's super lazy and a master of procrastination. In comparison to mine, your stories are way complicated and need to have the complete plot before writing so they work. Otherwise they will end in chaos. I have no plot, and I don't write ahead, so there's no fixed days for me. The only problem is the nonlinear nature of the stories, which sometimes mess up the whole story, especially where I tried to differ from what really happened, or tried to make things look nicer than it was. I messed up a few times with the logic and behavior to the point I had to take the published chapter apart and restructure and rewrite it as it was, but other than that it's basically a biography mixed with my view of life, or on best cases my wishes ( in some parts of the Malicious Glee for instance) so as i said there's no discipline and no plan there 😅
  24. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading, it wasn't easy to write but I had to do it.
  25. @Jeff Burton maybe we should put the Skype ring tone as the phone ring tone. And Liam was definitely a ruthless beta, but then there was no grammarly , deepl or open AI at the time. Even now, a beta reader who discuss the plausibility and the holes of the story is really worth it since AI cannot see beyond its own models and cannot feel (yet). Glad you're back. And you probably have tons to read. Luckily I'm one of those lazy ones who posts once in a while. I'm looking forward to your stories 😎 If you find time, the discipline is silence is Liam's story as teenager, and the Malicious Glee their everyday life now.
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