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WOW! I likes James. Please run with it, I want to find out what Kevin finds and how the program is exposed and hopefully stopped.
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Awww, thanks! I was thinking my attempt at humor was a total fail! always appreciate the reassurance.
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I hate the word panties. I typically refuse to use it. I have never known consciously why I hate it but ever since I was a kid to me it just has a dirty connontation. It makes uncomfortable just to hear it.
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Happy Birthday!!
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Wow, you printed it? Cool! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have more coming, I just have to write faster, lol. My family keeps me so busy during the summer that I can't get as much done as I would like. I have many short stories for the anthologies but you'll have to wait a bit for more novella length ones.
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Oh yes, I have started writing the third story. I'll even tell you it features The Snake... but that's it You'll have to wait to find out more! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked the stories!!
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Chapter 13: Meeting with The Snake
Cia commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 13: Meeting with The Snake
Yep, yep! Full circle so to speak, they needed an heir. That was a concern all through the story. A niece was ideal for them to adopt, even if he didn't get to meet his brother. -
Yes, I was tying the past to the present, so to speak. I wasn't sure exactly how I was going to link the two stories in the beginning but as I wrote it this scenario became perfect. I had to bring back Velaku and Natham, they're too cute to leave alone!
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Chapter 11: Pictures in the Mind
Cia commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 11: Pictures in the Mind
Thank you! I really wanted them to be balanced, equals though not in necessarily the same aspects of their lives. *big grins* I love getting your reviews, such lovely compliments. Thanks!! -
I'm glad you liked it! Sex scenes should be realistic but still hot and steamy and fun too. I try to balance all of that when I write them. I'm glad you're still slogging through and enjoying the story!
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Other than clearing up misconceptions, if you choose to, who you fall in love with or are attracted to really shouldn't have to be shouted from the rooftops. I do understand the urge but when it happens and the opportunities come, you know you will share. You're not hiding it, you're just waiting for it to be right. That's the way it should be. It's a personal thing, telling people should be personal too. And I love that your mom seems so accepting. Having a supportive family like her and your siblings is great!
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"Do you have a roommate?" He bit my nipple, making me shudder. "You shouldn't be able to talk right now." He leaned up and moved his hips in a circle. I couldn't help but groan and shiver at the intense sensation. I was flushed, my chest tight, panting through my mouth as I tried to think past the pleasure. He undulated again and I couldn't help but thrust back to get his cock deeper. Tonight's celebration of meeting my article deadline was going VERY well. Then I heard it ag
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LOL, no kidding! If you can feel how someone really feels, not just what they say they feel or how they act, we would understand each other's motivations quite a bit better. It's hard to lie if someone else can feel it!! Keep reading, you'll find out all about the cure, I promise!
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Ahh, there are some scenes but I don't tend to be too liberal with them, I prefer to write more story than sex. What I do have I try to make... appealing, lol. I'm glad you are liking the story so far, thanks again for leaving reviews, I really appreciate it!
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LOL, my hubby always asks me why I'm smiling when I read stories I really like. I'm glad you had one of those moments! Loving the reviews, thanks so much!
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I didn't want Bashta to be weak at all, even with the bad things from his past. He's survived on his own, he can make it through anything!
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This one doesn't have much d/s in it, not in the traditionl sense but I hope you like it! I love the sexy cats
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LOL, yes, my ongoing readers at the time would have tortured me if I hadn't written that in. I toyed with not adding it and it didn't go over well The torture was a tad rough, most of my stories aren't as explicit as this one. You'll find if you read my stories, most of them end up happy. I am a sap at heart and as much as I feed them angst and issues, I like to reward them with happiness after, lol. If you liked this story, I wrote a 2nd story in the series called Two of a Kind. It's longer and while there are problems you won't find any torture Thank you for all of the great reviews, it was a great way to wake up!
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Well in many ways they have been taking turns. Remember, in the beginning, Natham took a knife for Velaku. A good partnership allows each person to be both the protected and protector. It's all about balance. Most importantly I wanted Natham to have that moment of fighting back. No one should remain a victim; he took control just when he really needed to.
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Mates are bound well before they meet; they just don't know who it is until they meet. Then the recognition is instant once they are old enough to understand. It was the extreme torture that made Natham reach out along that bond and link them before they met in person. Thanks again for reviewing!!
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Yes This isn't the most dramatic chapter of the story but I did try to make it as unexpected as possible.
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I can create visuals, I know I can do that quite well. Dialogue requires much more editing to ensure the correct flow as if people were really speaking. Thankfully I have a great beta. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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It took me a minute to find anything about this guy, since you didn't mention his username. It doesn't appear as if Jevic is an 'active' member of the site since he hasn't been on since February. The one story he has posted in GA Stories is a 'linked' story. His website appears to have quite a few more stories as WIP's, the link is on his profile page, but as I'm not a follower of his I have no idea if he is posting anywhere else or not. You might consider sending him an email or comment through his website, most authors respond to those.
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Getting to know what happened between Jake and Eli is good but other than that this chapter was a rehash. You could easily just swap pov's for the scene without having to go back over everything. Many people use more than one pov for their story and it can work if you don't try to head hop paragraphy by paragraph but I feel it's almost cheating to just write the same story from a different perspective. I try to pick the one character that is the most integral to the chapter and use their pov. You can give clues to how the other characters think and act with their actions and expressions and movements still.
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It would definitely be an unpleasant way to be outed! Not to mention just flat out embarrassing to be caught by your mom in your jeans with a raging erection and your boyfriend the same way. I'm glad you didn't make Jake an abusive jerk who would beat up on Viz but one part did confuse me during their conversation. You wrote, You're the closet thing he has to a brother, from Viz to Jake, but Eli has a brother. I think the sentiment you were going for is that he is as close to him as a brother would be.
