Kev de Cauchery
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Lugh pretty much covered it all, but i just want to point out that you need at least five posts to enjoy the full features of the site.
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Happy Birthday, Eric!
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Thank you Nephy! for a great story and ending. I love how it ends sweetly. Thank you again!
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I always like it when the estranged father and son reconciles. Ray is still the rough person he is but he just understood. That's great. Reading on...
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Good. There's a chance of finding him, obviously. I still hate the headmaster tho.
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Gosh I only hated the headmaster more!!!!! I kinda think I know what'll happen soon in the next chappy. Let's see if I'm right. Well, tbh, though, Josh and Ash only had to wait for a few weeks or a month till they don't have the teacher/student relationship... but then, it takes away the fun.
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Gosh, I know exactly what it feels like to feel like having nothing. That conversation and description was spot on. *tears*
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Well, Stu didn't say, so I'll say this is a good chappy. I don't like Ash's father, like, at all.. well, tbh, this comes a little earlier than i expected, the Ash moving to Josh place.
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A bit furious about the headmaster.... Anyway, I was meant to say great writing. I've enjoyed it so far. Reading on... *need to get it on with Josh.*
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This chappy is intense. I don't want the boy dead! Breaks my heart.
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This is indeed a great beginning. I'm always intrigued with relationships between teachers/profs and students. Maybe I'm one who always admire mine. I really like this chapter. It opens up to so many possibilities. Just one tiny note: about in the middle towards the latter part, there's one paragraph that somehow took a first-person POV rather than the third person POV. It doesn't interfere with the reading, but I just thought I'd point it out. Also, I thought you love reviews, so I'm just a little surprised that you posted all the chapters of this story in one day. But that's good for me since I love completed stories. Reading on...
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Hey hon. This is a shock, now isn't it? I had to read twice to get the ending. I like the story, because it tugs at my heart. Sure sign to me of good writing. But, - remember this comes from love - as for the surprise ending, I wish there were just some more hints/foreshadowing. Maybe there are some, , but I haven't notice them. Also, as we have talked about, the nature of short story is that you don't tie up all the loose ends. Well, I wish I could know more about Eric and Paul, e.g. Why the persona Paul was created? However, despite all that, I still love the story, so... Good writing good read!
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A Challenge Accepted
Kev de Cauchery commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Gosh, this story makes me smile all the way through. Now I want to know about them. -
I finished it and i'll say i like it a lot. Honest tho, I'm more of a build-up guy, i.e. i'm more attracted to how they became a couple than the things happened after, but the story is still interesting to keep me reading. Hmm, if i had to critique, i miss the plot a bit with i think two chapters of sex scene in the middle. Also I found quite a few run-ons, but i'm a grammar freak.
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Can't help but like the 1st chappy. Reading on...
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Happy Birthday, Alex！
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Happy Birthday, Myr! Have a good one!
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sixteen hundred problems... but a bitch ain't one!
Kev de Cauchery commented on PlugInMatty's blog entry in Nobody likes you when you're 23.
Hello! So you're alive! Yay! A pic of you must be in toll! In order to show us you're alive. Good luck with the job. Can't wait to read works by you, since I normally don't do in-series story, a short story is just right. Just saying, the first time I wrote a sex scene went better than I thought. Nathan is alright, cute and all... -
Happy Birthday Graeme!
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Welcome to the GA!~ Post post post!
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Happy Birthday, Mark! Hope it's a good one!
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This is a rare episode where I love all the characters except Sue and Jessie St. James. I just love Burt, Brittany and Blaine. This is great.
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Happy Birthday Paul!
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A bit graphic, just how I like it. Feels real, and a wonderful usage of the color grey.
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I don't know. I find it hard to connect this poem with your looks. But then it's wonderfully done. Write more, please. Even if it may be dark.
