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Owen is totally inexperienced. At 18? His awakening to and the development of his sexuality is likely to be harsh! Or will he be one of the few who find first time love? Watching this space.
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Love the slow development of the story; of the warmness of Shirl; and the selfless caring way Jake talks of things to comfort and make Little Man aware of the love surrounding him whilst sleep helps recovery.
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It really must be love! A cake wilingly offering himself to a fork! But why Oliver's apprehension at the barn's doorway ? Is Oliver hiding something about the barn and the smell of death therein?
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One happy Father's Day. One happy father enjoying an unexpected gift from his son. Great fun.
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Loving the way the story is slowly developing with the frisson of danger in the relationship of Timothy and Oliver. Both wanting but wary.
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
sandeman commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
Frank is still the dominant boss!! Interesting development in their sexual relationship though. What else does Frank have in the closet? -
Timothy now attracts forks, most probably will want to consume him. Interesting that Clarentine smells lemon meringue from Timothy. Has Oliver already marked T as his? Will he reconnect with him? More importantly will he or can he offer him protection? And love?
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Frank's gentler approach to life and love seems genuine; but can a leopard change its spots overnight? Is Marc right to feel apprehensive?
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Oh my, Timothy! You may well hope to escape from Oliver but a cake is a cake and a fork has now revealed itself to you. I hope that this will develop into romance and love rather than anything more distressing.
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" I was beginning to discern his wants - his appetites....I was observing peculiarities not entirely proper. " There must come a point at which I shall fall into a swoon with expectations of delight. But not too soon! Continue this elegant build-up to seduction. But who is seducing whom?
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Frank is the boss, and he does need to be authoritative. But Josh hits the nail on the head telling Frank that he can get more out of his staff by being the guy Mark sees when they are off the clock. That this relationship is good for Frank personally and for business. How will Mark, who is rightly upset accept new overtures from Frank ?
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"What Are You Up To?"
sandeman commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "What Are You Up To?"
I am in awe, continually amazed by the story and the way you blend poetry into your prose. This is a tale of resurrection and of redemption. I have no doubt that in Theron/Luka/Enzo it will be the hearts of Luka/Enzo that will come to the fore to recognise the love Devin has for the man he lost and now has found. Even if the eyes are a different colour. Paulo Coelho " The eyes are the mirror of the soul and reflect everything that seems to be hidden; and like a mirror, they also reflect the person looking into them." And there must surely be redemption from Heaven for the Morningstar ? -
What a delightful period piece of manners and mores this is developing into. In keeping with the period, I trust that Oliver's intentions towards Timothy are "honourable".
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Two Spirits ranch a physical and spiritual haven for wounded things. As the story of the Little Man develops I am sure we shall also be witnessing the unfolding of Jake's tale.
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This story gets even more amazing. But love as always the interplay between Vince and Jack.
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A hot chapter. If this is Marc's " ... one step at at time. No rush. ", then Soren Kraft is going to wow us with the story's development.
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A sweet story. I just love the Barrington family and the ease in which they seem to be accepting Oliver as a fitting friend for Timothy; and Timothy's embarrasment is delightful. I await the author's description of the first overtures of romance between Oliver and Timothy. . . and hope pride and prejudice and the morality of the time will not affect them adversely.
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A lovely start to a story that will slowly develop in the style of Austen. A tale not to be rushed by author or reader.
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Intriguing start.
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Entertaining and fun short story!
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Fine development of this story with the younger man making the first overtures. Would Frank ever have done this as he has always kept work and play separate, never forming a relationship with his employees. Interested to see how this will develop as their involvment becomes more intense.
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I do love this story and keep re-reading it. And again I hope Casual Wanderer will not mind if I quote from Philip Sidney's ' Song from Arcadia'. " My true-love hath my heart and I have his.....His heart in me keeps him and me in one ....His heart his wound received from my sight; My heart was wounded with his wounded heart......" Your next chapter soon, please.
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Just a beautiful last movement in an awe inspiring tone poem. I too had tears in my eyes at the end; and a longing for an encore. Simply wonderful.
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Great story. Loving the slow development of the obvious attraction each has for the other. " .... the air was thick with possibility.... " Indeed !!!
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Shakespeare. Sonnet 116. How exquisitely you have expanded this. "Love's not time's fool ... Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, but bears it out even to the edge of doom ..." I admire your skill in the way you are developing part 2 of the love story of Devin and Luka. A different approach and a different style in the way Devin is coming to the realisation of what has happened . This was a chapter full of surprises. With more to come. Just loving it !!!
