Well that went about as terrible as it could.
Lester is an asshole. I hope Nathanial learns how to use his powers as a weapon and eventually drives Lester insane. That guy deserves a slow, terrible death. Either that or Guy can eat him.
I was so freaking worried when you posted that there was a tearjerker in this chapter, but then we saw closure with Sebastian. This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.
I really enjoy this genre and I appreciate a story with less angst in it then the typical "Teen goes to live with his dad because of Tragedy X" storyline.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Wow. What an ending to chapter one. I really want to find out what led to the falling out between Noah and Scott. I want them to get back together, but I know that not all love stories lead to forever love.
I can see how this story could end satisfactorily with Rhydian moving back to England but PLEASE PLEASE LET HIM STAY!
I'm loving everything. I can't wait to see what happens at the rodeo.
Your storytelling is superb. The planning and greater picture needed for when Cody escaped the first time to the chance TJ had this chapter... I'm in awe.
I'm still pulling for TJ to discover his true self. I think that Devan has the ability to get through to him. It won't be an easy road but they can do it! Also, I have a sinking feeling that Dylan has cancer. I hope I'm wrong though.
Great start!
Will this be a series of Sunday updates around this length? It would be nice if we got more but some transparency in format would be great.
I'm looking forward to your developing of the characters. We got a small glimpse of them in this chapter and I'm sure there is more to learn soon.