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Sebastian is certainly different. Being able to go to a public pool in a string bikini takes balls!
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Karma. Such a wonderful feeling. And yes, peeing on an electric fence...not nice. You suddenly know exactly the point where everything is conected.....
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. ‘Viola, viola, as they say in France.’ 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 So which is it French: "raped, raped", or english: " stringed musical instument, stringed musical instrument"? I suppose it could be voila, voila.... but i can't do accents here... Good to see our hero had a wonderful australian education😆 Loved the reference to "core promise" For non australian a politician once tried to differetiate between "core promises"and "noncore promises". It didnt go down well in those more niaeve times. Love your writing. The twists, turns, shuffles and surprises. Entertaining!
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I have just rewatched Hornblower (the tv series) in particular season 2 ep 2.( perfect teev to watch while ironing!) Hornblower (played by Ioan Gruffud) and Archie, 4th lieutenant, (played by Jamie Bamber) was the most satisfying paring and would do for our heroes in Bridgemont. If i was clever id post photos....😆
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Your character do suffer for their roles, nothing nice and simple.... Now... please tell me things improve?😆
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Andys learned so much, and with Eric coming out a bit, it really is evoling as a story. That level of poverty, as in financial constraint, is just so scary. Makes you realise how fortunate you are. Great read.
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A much needed break from the drama. A little rnr for our heros. But you are setting us up. I can tell...😣 Great read, as ever. They are an endearing couple.
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Pants on fire Mr @Rigby Taylor; you know exactly what you are going to do to us readers; stretch it, twist it, give us hope, take it away and then smile! We are but putty.... The one thing Peter has on McFife is that McFife thinks he's dead, so provided Peter can keep out of the way of the police, AND set a trap for McFife, all will be fine!
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Chapter 12 Lost in the Forest
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 12 Lost in the Forest
Citroen; my favourite car! They are going to have so much explaining to do, and it is not going to sound rational. In fact its complete irrationality is what would make an intelligent member of the police realise it had to be true. But in their part of the world that maybe stretching things! Great read. Thanks. -
Do 16 year olds really still wear boxers to bed? Or is this an american thing? I cant decide whether the text is a red herring, or if there is serious mischief afoot....
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The Grainger/ Cavendish conversation has made me feel even more sorry for Cavendish. He seems to have been used by some many people in so many ways that he has lost a lot of himself. Then even when his "best friend" recognises the problem and offers Cavendish a way out, he cant see it. Sad when someone has been so abused they cant see there own way out. Great witing to draw such a character that doesn't make him seem like a pitiable fool. Glad Grainger is back. He is part of a much loved story😍 Thanks.
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While the conversation didnt really sem to have any resolution, it was the most rational and sensible JJ has ever been. He seemed to be trying to understand. Great writing. As for the raid. Hmmmm, the family seem to be getting into some pretty deep shite. I can't see this going well..... Thanks.
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Chapter 10 Gregor MacFife
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 10 Gregor MacFife
Well, you have made me realise that I can hold my breath for much longer than previously thought... from rape by dildo to climb out of drain....i am so glad i never smoked, i think i would have passed out somewhere around bulldozer..... Great read, amazing tension. Thanks. -
Blow job in a Tesla; definitely a twofa!
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Mr Scumble.... now there's a trustworthy sounding character! You are creating a cast of disreputables...😋
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Chapter 6 Problem Sorted
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 6 Problem Sorted
What some parents do to their children.... -
loved the banter. Nothing like the first nudist/naturist household I visited!
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Chapter 2 Frances Twists My Arm
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 2 Frances Twists My Arm
You write so cunningly, little hints, little distractions.... wonderful to read Thanks -
Chapter 28..... Denoument
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 28..... Denoument
As i am australian by birth and canadian by choice/true lurve, i don't have any ingrained prejudices either way. Outdoor ed in scotland; there a great story on GA about a Scots out door ed teacher. Your stories make my day too. I think i have the easier side of the bargain!😆 -
Chapter 28..... Denoument
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 28..... Denoument
"A Wog, a Frog and their Poofy-Mongrel" . Great story and a great place to end this chapter! Thanks, and really looking forward to the next story, tho' "Dome of Death" already has me worried! -
And you don't think that's what worries me?😣😉
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Too, too clever, I hope the police are stereotypical, i have a dark feeling... not good, not good at al....
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Oh! Robert, Robert, Robert: do I understand? Yep, am I pleased? Yep, Right thing to do?...... this is not going to turn out well... oh! Bugger! Very clever, just hope its clever enough. And if he's not, we know who to blame @Rigby Taylor! Good reading, thanks.
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I really, truly, do not like where this seems to be going... Robert is in a very dark place. 😯
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@glennish; very funny, but oh! So sexist! 😉 I can see all these gay/bi boys having great sex and all these straight/gay girls siting around at school frustated as hell, listening to stories of passionate and lascivious nights! I think you set the feminist cause back a generation😆😆😆😆😂
