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It's another great chapter. I look forward to seeing how JJ and Henry handle meeting the family but it's good to see Franklin and JJ reunite without any secrets. Now we may learn JJ's real name and age and the circumstances of the kidnapping.

A great story and a fantastic chapter, I look forward to seeing what Jake and Sammy get into next. With luck mom won't be any the wiser to the influx of cash in her account.

It's a great story, I recall so many of those items mentioned like The Joy Sex and the unmentioned Joy of Gay Sex (I had first editions of both) and was a long time Mandate and other onehanded mags reader. Thanks for bringing back some memories from my own misspent youth.

I lookk forward to reading more of the story.

Great story, I hope there is a third installment of this great saga.

Great chapter, and a fantastic trip too.

+ A great story, I look forward to reading future chapters.

It's a great beginning and quite original and compelling in it's build up. I look forward to seeing where you take the story.

It's a great beginning chapter of Daniel's adventures. I look forward to seeing where the story goes. In your description of Tampa it was just how my cousin and I felt when we spent a few days there years ago minus Toledo's pot holes.

It's great so far, I look forward to seeing what happens next in Jake and the boys lives. With luck Shamus will get his act together and make a life with the four of them.

I look forward to future chapters, the beginning has hooked me in.

Another great chapter, I lhope we see some interaction with Brian and the others who came back in time.

It's great, I look forward to the following Do Overs.

It's a great start, and the description of hunter and the family dynamics leaves me feel like I know the family. I look forward to the future chapters.

A great story, it makes me want to know more and experience Australia for myself. So what happens next?