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Aww sorry for spoiling your dinner but on the plus side I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter And yes...it is the same Darhan we talked about in Birmingham Thanks for reading

well yes Arensha is evil seeing as though he is the main antagonist and do you really think he is going to be killed off right now? lol not happening heheh thanks for reading Frosty

New chapter out guys! Let me know what you think so far, I'd love to hear your opinions chapter 13

MATT The first thing I immediately could tell was that I had had no visions that night; a fact for which I was eternally grateful. Today was the first day of the production of Dan’s bow. I had gone over plans with the Master Forge man and the plans he had were beautiful. Dan had more training today and I wondered how he was coping with it all. He had never once voiced a complaint about his training to me. I took it as a good sign; he would let me know if something was tro

wow such an excellent chapter! like the others have said, that really didnt feel like 11K + the chapter went so quick! I feel so sorry for Blake he just can't seem to find any stability and this is going to make him worse I fear. (you can type at the speed of light yes because i cant wait for another chapter)

:o I'm later than Nephy for once! Can't believe I've lost tabs on this thread. Welcome and belated welcome to all who have arrived since my last post lol. Have fun, try and be as crazy as the rest of us enjoy

HAVE A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKY! :D

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DOUW!!!!!!!! HAVE A GREAT DAY! :D :D

Wow what a wonderful review nephy! Thank you I'm glad I'm improving and I hope that it will keep on that way Formatting...groan I will try again to look at it thanks for mentioning it

Who's sleeping outside?

If you dare stop this story I will lose you somewhere in England Anyway! I really enjoyed the opening chapter (I like the fighting aspect hehe) And there is plenty to make us want the next chapter, plenty of questions I've asked myself so please continue

More more more more more! I need more! I am so caught up in this story and hoping things will work out. This is a great story

CONGRATS RENEE!!! :D :D

Seriously, either you have major insecurities or you have no sense of humility or morality whatsoever. I agree with the others, being an alpha male doesn't mean 'I've slept with more girls than you' etc etc. An alpha male is respected and in turn respects those around him. Not returning respect just makes you a prick, and you have to earn respect in the first place. Manipulating people for sex? What a pleasant person you must be. And you've met 6 people since this thread started? Good for you...that's six pieces of evidence to show you need to gain more morals. I'm wondering when she finds out if you'll even meet with her in person to apologise. Look long and hard at yourself in the mirror, without telling yourself how good you think you look, and say to yourself why you feel the need to do this and why your girlfriend means so little to you. Because, like everyone else has said, she is going to get hurt and you don't sound like you have considered her once.

This chapter makes you sad? How come? In other news oh dear Coop had better come up with something quick lol Loving the story Jian

Please West, let paya deal with your 'excitement' the rest of us dont need to see that As for programme, I'll probably leech around some people maybe lol and just follow like a sheep And as for meeting places seeing as though I wont be staying in London I'm easy. ( Easy only in terms of meeting places )

Well that was some journey Andy, I was so glad Jase and Pete finally worked it through in the end. You know I'm crappy with reviews etc etc, so I'll do my customary 'I loved it' and say this is all the evidence needed that making you promising was the right decision by a country mile. and because I liked it so much you get an Aggie hug Great work Andy, looking forward to your future projects.

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Thanks Bleu I'm trying to show the different sides of Matt and Dan's relationship and I'm glad they are coming across Glad to know you're still enjoying it Aww maria, Im sure you'll rock the thread once you catch up And to everyone else, I jumped to writing the ending today. So the outcome of Seeing Double is settled, what's going to happen I wonder! Any suggestions or guesses? Voice them here

If I could speak the language well and I could get a job reasonably well I would have no problem moving away from England. I'd want to visit UK regularly to see parents but for new experiences I wouldnt mind moving.

awww thanks frosty, but you're a star betaing for me as well Matt and Dan will need to be strong for the coming war lol but thanks for loving the story

Matt's character is complex and it depends what environment he is in.

hehe the change is quite cool the answer to why may or may not be answered lol. yes the outfit was quite noticeable wasnt it? lolThanks maria love to hear you like it

Tension? Where? :PI love writing Sarala's bits it's always fun to have one or two characters which provide relief from the rest of the story :)Of course I had to use an excuse to eat loads it was just waiting to happen ;)I'm glad the practice was good, I wanted to show them toying with each so to speak :PAnd Monopoly? It depends how ruthless you are heheThanks for reading Anyta!

aww thank PK, great to here from you :)I'm glad that it shows how much Matt and Dan love each other, I think they'll need it to hold very soon.Thanks for reading!