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  1. Andrew Q Gordon
    Ohhh better not let you two in the same room. -- I wish I could say people like her do not exist. i suspect they are far fewer than it would seem from the stories on here - but then this is fiction all around no? I think Jason is asking himself a lot of the same questions you raised regarding his mother - but sadly - she is so NOT done.
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    Question - when - time wise, is this set? I mean who has to come down to answer a house phone? Lucca would have his own cell for sure but at a minimum the house would have multiple phones, 20 years ago - not so much so just wondered that point. Nice chapter, more about Lucca and add Addie into the picture. Are you going to switch back and forth for a bit, or is that just how it worked out thus far. You're writing is very fluid, reads very well. Now just make the chapters longer
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    Why ??? Be whatever you want and don't worry - it's really not important which you are or if you are even either, it's about being who you are and comfortable with that. Sounds like you have the chance to 'experiment' and find out which you are - that seems like a to me
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    Those were kind of the emotions I was going for. It was a whirl wind and dad was the think keeping it together. As for another school - Jason was going to ask his dad to pay for school if he gave up his scholarship - Royce has money, buckets of it, and so do the grandparents - and that's why he said don't quit without talking to him first - he wasn't going to let it happen, but he didn't want Jason to just give up either. If he said, don't worry about school, the easy way would be for Jason to quit. This way he had to at least see what would happen first - dad's kinda tricksy that way
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    My mom asked me if I was sure because she didn't think I was and then with the next breath, she told me she always knew. Mom's even homophobic ones - and I don't know that Mrs. T is homophobic, just doesn't want her kid to be one [Yeah yeah, I know just kidding] -- I really did try to make things realistic, I didn't want them to easy to silly too pat, to fantastical, glad I succeeded along the way. As for Peter, well ... there's a chapter later that sort of explain why he has no self confidence, or at least alludes to it, we can discuss this again when you read that
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    Rash? Jason? no comment, but let's just say it's a good thing there isn't a cliff anywhere around.
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    Rash? Jason? no comment, but let's just say it's a good thing there isn't a cliff anywhere around.
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    Oh naughty Cia, Bad, naughty wicked Cia, leaving us with this happy little scene right after you paint the dark skies of doom looming over everyone. I'm so sure you're giggling and laughing at us as you've left us with this feeling of doom hanging over the wonderful moment. Okay so that was nice -lovely ending - tugs at my maternal/paternal heartstrings - I think I'm having sympathy hormonal episodes So next up the Carthera Clan rumble??? You can call it Cavel kicks ass
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    Since Mark is so fond of writing about others - here's one about him - Young Marky lived on a farm but he only liked to use his right arm He'd jerk and he stroke in his eye it did poke Now the eye patch adds to his charm yeah I know I have totally opened myself up for it, but meh, go for it, I'm sure I've been called worse - LWF (for those who remember that nickname)
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    That was an interest shift. I thought for sure this was all about Lucca - but then you give us Sam - going to be a bit more than just one person's 'tale' I see. Seriously, I said this before, but you really add to your story with the small details you give us, the quirks, the picture you're painting. Definitlely looking to read more. Oh yeah, I forgot to say this but I was a tad disappointed when I realized the Pitch in Perfect Pitch meant Pitch as in music and not baseball - I such a baseball nerd. But I should have figured it out - intune? Yeah I'm not that bright am I? Don't mind me, still very good stuff.
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    Well as promised I read it on the train and I have to say this was very good writing. The emotions were clear and didn't seem forced, the little details were great - the scrabble, the colors, the hat etc. The unanswered questions were not a distraction but rather they made me want to read more - but alas there isn't more yet - just kidding don't rush it, do it on your schedule. I did want to smack the crap outta Lucca for being so dense, but I suspect that is the emotion you were going for Really well done.
  12. Andrew Q Gordon
    Welcome Q You two threw me for a loop there for a second - most people call me Q - I prefer Andy so you are welcome to you Q, though I don't know I can stop folks from calling me that. Have fun and enjoy.
  13. Andrew Q Gordon
    Am usually a day late and a buck short, but if I beat Nephy in saying hello, I know I'm not late. Welcome and Enjoy
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    Frisbee

    Andrew Q Gordon commented on Dark's story chapter in Frisbee

    Alrighty, now I'm starting to see a bit more about Kynan. But I guess it's still a question. Do Azil and karadur know the Queen is Kynan's mum? And one wonders how it is that the queen had a son, but yet no one knew she had a kid? See what I mean about not answering questions? Think I'll go have a cookie or something.
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    Repairs

    Andrew Q Gordon commented on Dark's story chapter in Repairs

    I know you once said that Kynan, while older chronologically than Alan, isn't really older developmentally. But though Demons might not develop or reach maturity as fast, Kynan is clearly far beyond Alan in maturity and in experience. What I still find so fascinating is his interest in the little pup. It's clear there is more there than just fascination with his gadgets. Alan on the other hand seemed awfully put out when they first met, almost upset. Wonder when that will change because when we see the two in the the main story - Alan is totally smitten.
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    So my crushes tend towards athletes and not models or movie stars - these were just a couple that come to mind Cristiano Renaldo - love to see him shirtless and he likes to be shirtless it seems. Jose Reyes - shortstop for the New York Mets. Not a great picture but definitely does it for me.
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    Chance Meeting

    Andrew Q Gordon commented on Dark's story chapter in Chance Meeting

    Alan was so precocious even at 14. One wonders what the pair of them will do now that they are bonded. It's easy to see why Alan might fall for Kynan, but the reverse isn't quite so easy to see. I mean here, he sees this cute little kid, who is really just a kid, even at 14. Yeah he's wicked smart etc, but they're just so worlds [no pun] apart. But they do make a fetching couple despite all that.
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    The Offer

    Andrew Q Gordon commented on Dark's story chapter in The Offer

    I do hope you don't think I'm stalking you - it's not my nature to be stalkerish - but since you asked if I read the chronicles, I figured I should. You have this incredibly annoying habit of not answering things. I'm like. So confused. I thought the Queen was his mum, and I thought Karadur and Azil knew it. clearly they don't or do they? See what I mean about annoying habit. But it does really add context to the story so good that you posted it. This little world you've created is probably stuck in your head, trying to come out and play every now and then, isn't it?
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    Cailen is responsible for Smexy Signature Guy - I'm just using it. (I think it's him to be honest.)
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    Holy Crap Darkman, that was so F'ing cool!!!! I'm not exactly sure what happened at first, I suspect the spell Duncan used created a link to between the house, the borderland and Kynan's cell. But wow, Kynan's part angel? Woof - oh wait that's Alan's line Azil and Karadur don't seem confident the queen is gonna be happy about the matting of Alan and Kynan. Given how things go among demons, that could be a bad thing. And btw, Imma go bust Karadur in the chops for calling Alan a pest. Hands off the wolfie demon. Good job. What next?
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    Sure, trash my lack of medical knowledge - thanks a bunch I suppose you'd be right - just never thought about it enough to figure that part out. Thanks for telling me NOW
  22. Andrew Q Gordon
    Yeah, this is the time for friends and family, I was trying to show how everyone had/has their own little issues - wendy, dean, etc that are still there while this is going on.
  23. Andrew Q Gordon
    I think if you read the responses to this chapter you'll see that there was a grain of reality in this chapter. For me, the fact that Amanda, despite her own pain could reach out to Jason's mom - and let's be clear, she did it for him not Barbara - must have affected Barbara quite a bit. How do you respond to someone who says, "my son might die tonight, but I want you to see what you're about to lose?" Barbara wasn't a terrible person, just a tad misguide [well tad might be too easy ]
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    No no no, Amanda has more class than that - she isn't about to lower herself. Right about now, she is more Jason's mom, than Barbara. But we'll see.
  25. Andrew Q Gordon
    Addicting? Wow, that's one like As for being about to keep reading, yeah, I was getting a lot of requests to post faster around this time When I wrote this part I didn't want it to be - hurt okay, all better now. Nor did I want it to be just a few paragraphs of recap. I wanted to show how it affected everyone else too.
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