LJH

Why thank you for the comment. Free Falling is just a snippet of what you're going to feel in the upcoming chapters. Ma is anything but whom she appears to be and she knows exactly how to handle the situation. She certainkly surprised me with that gun move. She is more than what you would expect her to be and I'm glad you noticed that. By the way, Colton says Hi to Patrick and Ben.

I just love the humour. It seems to come naturally to you and this is what caught my attention from the get go. I hope to see more of Gerard, and by the looks of things, I think he's in for the long haul. Although one can't be too sure of that. I love the way in which you make everything seem so normal and yet quite exciting too for instance when everyone helps to look for an apartment...i think a lot of people use their friends to help out. All in all, superb.

Lee! Of all people. Corbs, you have no conscience! I was like that in my youth. If my advances didn't work on someone, I rushed in where angels fear to tread with someone I knew. My bad. The unlikeliness of the scene with Corb and Lee was the pulling factor for me. But there wewre other things: Mike's sudden, unannounced appearance got my blood boiling. WTF i thought, this is so not the time to just appear, especially when Pete and Corb are discussing things. Obviously Pete would have seen that kiss. Now what? AAAAAARGH, this is making me so damned angry. Just when I thought there might be relief, you go and dive into the dark side. AGAIN! I feel that Pete is the one who is left dangling in this chapter. Corbs, you had better make amends, and quickly too. The vchemistry between Corbs and Pete is tangible. I yearn for more of their chemistry.

Thanks for the comment Joann. Well, Colton certainly did get out of town, where he is going and what is he going to do is anyone's guess. He hasn't quite told me yet. Vwery secretive he is. Jack of-ourse has his problems, and Ma Greaney, or Sue, is still going to be jampacked full of surprises. I'm glad you are enjoying the ride, albeit the short chapters.

Imagine no possessions I wonder if you can No need for greed or hunger A brotherhood of man Imagine all the people, sharing all the world…* Mr and Mrs O’Malley knelt beside a wooden cross in the cordoned off area of the blast zone, and Mr Lachlan, the town’s only vet, added a single yellow rose amongst the hundreds of wreaths that crowded the side of the road. Dolly Loman, wept as she pinned a colour photograph of her daughter Rose on the makeshift notice board donated by the school. Her

Well, im not a YES man when it comes to writing. First off, YES i enjoyed it. You captured the angst of what would happen in a science experiment gone wrong. Second, your writing is clear. Lots of suspense and i like suspense. Third, the characters are well written. I sensed anger and danger all the way thru. All this story needs is a little more Grammar precision. There were some stoppages in the flow for me. Interesting read.

I get this story so totally now. My lad Corn is so conflicted so he does what he must. I dont think his is a case of 'meat is meat a man must eat'. In his attempt to find that ellusive but alluring matter of the heart we call LOVE he must get hurt. We all hurt. It is one of the things that confirm our humanity. In his desire to find inner peace with Love 1 or Love 2 he meets his opposites in both of them and in so doing he learns more about himself with each chapter. Mike is filled with denial and Corb must play that game with him. Pete is filled with denial too. Both Mike and Pete are such different characters and they are totally believable. The images you have conveyed thus far so vivid. Mike CAUGHT! At first i was like 'Ja, see what you have done Mike...' but the scene was written with such finesse that i went back to analyse it several times. Its a pivotal moment. Mike needs to dig deeper and Pete needs to chill. Beautful chapter. Well done Mr Wolf.

Well now, Joann. Thank you for the comment. I'm Jack and I wanted to say tha' it's a terrible thing that LJH has put me through. I'm rightly wonderin' if I can do everything he wants me to, but I know he'll help me thru it. I do miss my bike. I miss Colton a hell of a lot. I love and adore Ma Greaney. Well, wherever I am, I know Colton will find me, even if he has to kill to get to me. My notebook, well, it may or may not have the answers he seeks. I hope he can make head or tail out of it. We'll see. yes, thuings are a fixin to get pretty wild and awesome. I hope Colton is fixin' to find me, dead or alive. Thanks for followin' the story.

HI Conner. Ma Greaney here. Well, I do like short and positive comments. To tell you the truth, I like the direction too. What I can tell you is that LJH has asked me to do certain things that you might find surprising, but you know, this is fiction, and anything can happen. Hope to see you comment again soon my lad.

Hi Mike...this is Colton speaking. Well, firstly I'm the happiest guy this side of Dublin that you're enjoyin' this story. To answer your question as to whether Jack is a good guy gone bad or a bad guy gone good, well, the truth is I just don't rightly know. (Aside) - I don't even think LJH knows. However, his notebook will probably tell us a lot more about him. LJH seems to be occupied with the thriller aspect of this story, but I can tell you it's going to be a rollercoaster from here on in. I do hope to find Jack but I know it's goin' to take everything I have. I miss the guy.

Its difficult to write good humour into crime fiction and so far i like what i have read. I think i would like to go on this journey with Ryan and Cole. Im a sucker for goid, thrilling stuff. I'm hooked. (pun).

I hope someday you’ll join us And the world will be as one* ‘I’m a friend of the driver who survived the bus explosion in Laferty two days ago.’ Colton said. ‘I’d like to speak to the commissioner.’ The beady eyed man with a pencil sharp nose glared at him as if he were asking the impossible. ‘Commissioner only takes appointments.’ ‘I have information regarding the driver.’ ‘Make an appointment and I’m sure he’ll see you. Depends entirely on his schedule,’ the man said, returning his at

This is exactly how I want readers to view it, from an individual POV. We have all had scary moments in our lives, and some are worse than others, and this story I hope will remind us that we have the power to stop wars, and senseless killing all in aid of a cause.

This "civil war" if you want to call it that, was a perverse quirk of history that goes back at least 1000 years. I'm glad you are reading this Joann. Your input means a lot to me. The tragedy was that it was not stopped a long time back.

Mike, glad to hear from you lad. Yes. Emotion plays a huge part in this story. As you know, I like to write decription in action and it's difficult for me to write emotion, even though I love reading a story that gets me crying. I'm glad I got a response from you that means I have set an emotional link that has engaged you. That means a lot to me. Thanks bro.

You may say I’m a dreamer But I’m not the only one* Colton gripped Jack’s hand, then climbed onto the bed and lay beside him. ‘Shhh…you need to rest my baby. We can talk about this some other time when you’re feelin’ better.’ Jack shook his head. ‘Can’t. Need to show ya so’thin’. Notes…I wrote notes. I want you to read…’ Colton dug into his crinkled trouser pocket and brought out the postcard sized notebook. ‘You mean this?’ Jack nodded. ‘Now? You want me to read this now?’ ‘Whene’er…

My man Corb got a reaction out of Pete. YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY. SHew. I have no idea where Pete is leading Corbs, I hope it's to a sunny place filled with love. Even if it isn't, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I laughed and laughed with my hubby when Mike brought his cadets over the hill, we both were stunned. Way to go Mikieeeeee! Hubby asks the question, Why would Pete be bothered about Mike's shirt lying on the lawn? Why would he say I miss you? Why would he not give Corbs a reason to cancel with Mike? Answer? Pete likes Corbs, a lot, yet is scared to say because hubby reckons that Pete has had an unfortunate gay experience that he doesn't want repeated. All speculation I might add. But still, a marvelous chapter.

Hi Billy. Thanks for the read. Your input means a lot to me. I wanted to get across the emotion right from the start, a huge gamble because readers tend to first get used to a character then allow the emotion to flow. The Irish problem and Apartheid were terrible periods in man's history. I write this story to remind ourselves that these attrocities have happened and must never be forgotten.

Yes, it was a tragic time for millions of people. The problem however, was so confusing. On the one hand it was a religious war between Catholic and Protestant, and on the other it was political. This is the challenge for this story. I will need to concentrate on one or the other without making it confusing. I hope I succeed. Glad you enjoyed it. Hugs

Ah man. Ray I had no idea. Wow. What a blow. You just stay strong bro and its okay to cry. Suicide is an awful thing. It took me a long time to get over the death of my man. Wrote a lot of poetry. Soul searched. As time went by, i learned many lessons. Rodney gassed himself in our trailer and it shook my world. Guilt, denial, hate etc. it comes and goes in spurts. I would wake up at night wailing and smelling his deoderant on the pillows. I left everything of his untouched for many years. My friends say five years, i think it was less than five. No one understood me then. I was cranky and emotionless. Words did not heal me. Time healed me. Everything came right. One night i met Louis 2 and someone, one of my friends, told him what happened. We have been together now for 19 years. What im trying to say is that no matter the loss, life goes on. You are in my thoughts and prayers. Hugs and respect Ray.

Imagine there’s no heaven It’s easy if you try No hell below us Above us only sky Imagine all the people Living for today…* 8th April, 1997 Two months before cease-fire. Life is all about choice. Some choose the high road, others choose the low road, and still some choose the road less travelled. The choices we make enable us to do the things we want, and discard the things we don’t want. There are those who will say that life is more than the sum of our choices, for life is also abou

The lives of Jack Milner and Colton Greaney change forever when tragedy strikes the small farming community of Laferty in Northern Ireland.

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Delightful. A superb uplifting story that warmed my heart. It has a certain kind of texture, like when your fingers wipe over suede. I was hooked by the colour of the journey of true love these two men held for each other. The story takes place on a farm and you could have written a million words with subplots and surprises. Instead, you focused on one emotion. Love. Oh i do like action, thrillers that kind of thing, but i also love stories that compel and engage no matter the genre. I'm a sucker for gay romance. With each paragraph you left me wondering if this romance will flourish or crash so you held me with that suspense. I loved the bits of detail you inserted about farm life. For me it was real. I was there with each character. The reveal was superb and well written. There was not one single word out of kilter here, oh, wait...that word smirked... Erm its just a pet peave of mine. This is a really beautiful story. Thank you.

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