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  1. dhphllps

    Welcome to Omaha

    I'm enjoying the story and appreciate the good writing. One minor quibble - the sources of the Missouri River are in and near Yellowstone National Park, not Glacier 😀
  2. dhphllps

    Chapter 10

    What beautiful, beautiful writing!
  3. Just when I thought I couldn't dislike Don any more than I already did…
  4. dhphllps

    Nocturne

    Thanks for another great chapter. Sorry to be pedantic, but retired professional musician in me can't resist a small correction: it's Juilliard 🙂 , with an extra letter i: https://www.juilliard.edu/
  5. dhphllps

    Chapter 1

    Realtor in business attire tromping around in mud and dirt.
  6. dhphllps

    Chapter 26

    Having heard a concert there recently I can confirm that acoustics of the main hall are pretty bad. And from the outside, what looks incredible from a distance is not so hot close up - lots rusty bare concrete in fair to poor condition, looking for the world like a Soviet designed apartment building. Still, an icon! 🙂
  7. dhphllps

    Chapter 31

    "why didn't (s)he say something, you know? Like, 'Hey, me and Mr Franks are going to lunch.'" Because, hopefully, her grammar is better than that? Edited just to be clear that I was joking. I forgot the ;-) at the end.
  8. dhphllps

    Chapter 1

    So happy to see the Leopards back!
  9. dhphllps

    Chapter 43

    So good to have you back!!!
  10. dhphllps

    Epilogue

    Well done! I missed this the first time around, so enjoyed it greatly. But the question of the hour, of course, is: will "Changing Lanes" follow?
  11. dhphllps

    Lump's Return

    "Ballzacki" ?! Literally LOL. Great story! Thanks :-)
  12. dhphllps

    Chapter 20

    Thank you for a wonderful story. I'm really enjoying it, but in this chapter you hit a pet peeve that I have to respond to: Loose is the opposite of tight. The opposite of win is lose, with just one o. Looser<-->tighter; Winner<-->loser. Sorry, I had to get that of my chest Thanks again for a great story, though
  13. Welcome to GA! Now sit back and relax, you're in good company. Can I get you something good to read? How about one of my newbie cheat sheets? It'll help you find something good to read while you are learning to navigate the site.

    http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/blog/288/entry-10435-cheat-sheets-for-newbies/

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