Frostina

*Giggles* Me too... one of two! If it's any help... I'm right there with you! My 2nd of two types

I second the Bayern shout out! i have one! YAY! oh and as for the second one... i am guessing coordinating people from all over the world would take just a tad too much organising! Besides... people like me... we live too far away! I sooo wanna come to London this Aug but.... i need a sponsor!

Glad that you liked it. I am having a little trouble fining the ground for Tyler and Scott. hence the diversion. but i will get into THAT groove soon, or so i hope at least As for kids not going to bed without being told... uh, i think if they are as responsible as Eli is, who practically takes acre of TY, not the other way around, i think she might. I say might, because there was no way to confirm that she did go to bed, who knows, it maybe that she was really really quiet with her lappy, on the bed!

I love Zach! lol i so so so love him! the last dialogue was truly awesome!

yeah.. well, I wasnt doing too well,so, the tension was something that wasnt building up too nicely in my head. instead of botching it up, i just decided to write of a simple day in their lives. I believe you will soon see why Tyler is neurotic about Eli. thanks for the review as always. I am trying to get back into the groove. i will.. soon. let me just get better!

Sooooooo... Bobby and puck were the two 'prisoners' that Rix had heard abt... And the whole ruse of his, to 'arrest' Amberly and brianna from the hotel was to get them there! huh! well done! I love how strong bobby is... the way he thinks that he had to live to protect puck, even if he was in so much pain that he'd rather die. (leaving behind Amberly and Brianna) But, didnt we hear at one point that one of the prisoners were dead? whoa! well.. PuCk cannot be dead, now, can he? Grrrr.. Cant wait for the next one now! When it it coming, btw? the Antho?

did we need to know of that side of Amberly? (given it's you who's writing it.. i bet we did! lol) Anywhooo.... Please tell me it was the 'uncle' who made the better offer? either ways, i am going to the next bit!

HAH! so he managed to achieve lift off! WTH did Rix do to Puck? It's just nerve racking to wait fto find that out! as for Bobby's journey, i', just gonna get to the next chapter

Hmmm... so, Dr. Atoll is tryna break Puck outta the establishment? Omy! Hanovers do seem like suck Nice people lol Hmmm.. what's his plan now? lets find out, now.. shall we?

Brianna was the 'Hard-ass' in the relationship? now, why doesnt that surprise me? lol Ah, well, lets see what u have in store for them now, shall we?

Jodran shud be shot!! Umm.. i know you're planning the whole courtroom scene... is there a chance someone could sneak in a taser? i dunno.. jussayin!

“After the break, we return with the breaking news of an adoption scam.” Tyler stared at the television, his eyes wide and heart pounding; not quite watching the image of the smart lady fade into commercials. Adoption scam? Anything to do with babies, and his mind went on an overdrive. He looked at the clock; he still had over three minutes before the news came on again. ‘Eli,’ he called from the base of the stairs. ‘It’s bed time.’ His daughter was usually not the one to stay up past h

Whoa! didnt expect that from Rick's wife. Hope things get easier for Wade and Rick Jr. now. as for Charlie and Scott, i have my fingers crossed to see what u have in store for them!

Smart she is! well, in the eyes of the dads, we're all little girls, doesnt matter the age! lol. She is really a fireball. thanks for the review KC. I just have to figure out Scott now. He's hiding from me!

Thanks for the review. This is really a character based story. I don't have a very well laid out plan as to how i plan to proceed with them or where i want to go! But, given how strong these characters are, i am sure they'll get there. All these chapters are just minor glimpses into their lives. Like i said earlier. they connect, but they dont necessarily follow a single train of plot! As for Eli, she is a fiesty girl. She often ends up taking care of her dad! Sarcasm doesnt come across too well, does it! No wonder i confuse people so! lol. Ch5 is done, i gotta write ch4 now! lol. lets see where i end up taking them

Hope you are having a blast! ps: Renee asked me to post this just so people know.. Like Andy said, she is camping, so.. she said thanks in advance, and she will hopefully be back on Sunday.

OH DEAR GOD!! i couldn't have said them any better!

Alone in the shower, Tyler let his thoughts wander. His mind was filled with visions of Scott. No matter how hard he tried, he just couldn’t resist imagining how wonderful it would be to just once return the longing gaze, to lose himself in the deep green pools that were Scott’s eyes. The memory of the one kiss haunted him; Scott’s warm hands cupping his cold face, not giving a damn as to who stared, in the middle of the day, in broad daylight. He could feel the desire coursing through him, e

Coffee!!

Pity you? put up with you? I think you got your words mixed up darlin' ! 'Cause there's no way in the world those are the words I'd use for what i think of you. Sweet, Naughty, Intelligent, quick, adorable, Loving, generous and a potty mouth... those are a few i would use! You have NO idea how easily you bring a smile on people's faces! Don't tell me you don't believe that! you're heard me giggle, right? (btw, did u hear me stopping? ) The world hasn't been kind to you, yet... yes, oh-so true... BUT think about it... you're just 18, and and... I have a piggy bank now! i AM saving up for a trip! and when i do... there is NO way i am going to take a NO for an answer! uh, you know that right? so... (uh, i lost my train of thought! ) Just... I cant imagine GA without you.. really you're one of the reasons i keep coming back everyday! a part of what i consider 'Family'. and

It's sooo sweet! i was thinking, 'Nooo! please dont let him be sold!!' really enjoyable read!

Loved it you write the sweetest stories! And, well, i know i am gonna sound like a broken record, but... the tenses, please do something about it

Such a beautiful story! a nice, warm feeling spread inside of me. The switching back and forth of tenses was a little distracting, but that didnt take much away from the story itself... oh, and I loved it, did i tell you that?

'You can play if you want to.' That just stole my heart!

‘Ty!’ Scott tried to get his attention, running after him through the lobby, only to find that Tyler’s shoulders squared and if possible, his pace grew quicker. Ever the gentleman, Scott let a woman and her child enter the hotel before he could dash out after the man of his dreams. It was that little delay that let Tyler jump into the cab and speed away. ‘Ty!’ he called out again, hoping he would hear, rather listen. He thought he saw Tyler turn back and look at him from inside the cab; he