WOW! It was sooo visual! the whole of it!
I feel bad for Arial, AND Asta. But, oh well... let me hope and pray that he breaks Asta's bond somewhere along the way, and escape! lol
wonderful story!
Wow, Thanks for the review Lugh. glad you liked it. just hope i get better now! also, i believe its better late than never. so, no worries abt the fact that the review was delayed. lol. cheers!
Whoa! WOW! and Ouch!
scary and very very mysterious!
Really enjoyed it! awesome story! would have NEVER guessed till you revealed it at the very end, tho.
Poor poor guy! i love the story, BUT the poor guy bore the brunt of it all and didnt even know what hit him! lol
(btw: can humans SEE cupid's arrow? )
Always love the twists and turns you plot. this was really really well done!
It's Such a sweet, simple heartwarming tale.
*sigh* made me want to stop and think awhile about all the legendary people who made us who we are all this time.
Thank you for showing us the greatness in all people.
pls pls pls tell me the man who came in wielding a stun gun is Puck! Omy!
how many twists will you make before we even give up the hopes of them ever un-twisting again?
*sigh* i want the next one... soon!
awwww.. Get better.. and stronger, so that.. just so that, the next time you got to shove someone out the door, you don't end up dislocating your shoulder... again!
*runs and hides*
oookay, i was smiling at 'Peach blossom gaze' and full-on grnning by the 'Cuddle'.
It was him coming to terms with his choice, ey? never easy this procrastination phase. especially with noone by the side. the fear of the unknown always (or mostly always ends up winning.) It's good to see that he did find someone. even if it means just this one cuddle and the kiss. Also the rain. Ever helpful nature, ey?
Uh-oh! enter... the ex! (or, is it? )
lol
Umm, you said it was a big chapter, it flew sooo fast! it was over before i began.
But, all in all cant wait for the next!
I bet I say this for EVERYONE who you named and/or referred to in the story, Thank you!
It sure WAS an interesting take on the fairy tale. Really liked how you twisted and turned things.
**goes back to dreaming about the Red gown**
Ha!
It's really painful how something out of the blue comes up once in a while in our lives and so blatantly bares all the small little things that the outer polishing does so well to cover up!
It's wonderfully told, and touched my heart as many times I've read it. and believe you me, i've read it more than once.
This is a review long overdue. Oh well, better late than never, ey?
thank you for the review! I'm so glad you like it. And yes, That is my fav line in the story too. the only line that makes me smile and bring tears to the eyes.