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I will book flights next week

Just what was the subject again?

The votes are even now after Jian changed his mind like a woman... You still have time to vote! Do it now! Chappy nine is coming soon!

Is everything alright, hun?

I'm sorry I answered to the last question 'other', since I didn't think any of the characters need developement more, they all felt real and complex for me. If I am forced to pick one out of all of your characters it would be Benny from Get it. He is a perfect gem for a character. Karl felt totally real, but now that I voted him to be the most complite character, I did have a thing that I would have wanted to hear more about him. The stuttering was forgotten quite fast and I was expecting it to emerge more at some point. Even the story tittle somehow gave me the impression there might be more to come of it - that was part of Paul and Karl's joint past. Even if Karl had been trained out of it, stuttering is something that comes easily back especially in stressful situations. Yet, Karl was such an enjoyable character to get into! I just have an addiction on everything you write. Please write more!!!!! Can't wait much longer for the sister-story of (In)visible! It is still in process, right? :2thumbs:

**marks down the note: Jian changed his vote from Miles to Dion** It is possible to change your vote until the poll is closed. I will let you guys know when that is happening Dion is golden inside out

Thank you so much inuberry! That is like the best compliment I have ever gotten The next chapter, The Shoulder to Cry on is out now.

How much lubricant do you need for it not to be difficult?

That was beutiful again, Sam. I really like your poems.

Oh LOL mustard, haha. that is reason enough

GIGANTIGBIRTHDAYHUGTOSTU

I think Team Miles is winning at this point... Team Dion, do you have any other arguments than he's hot? Ps. New chapter is about to be released soon!

The story is not finished... now is your time to tell if you want Nemo to end up with Dion or Miles. I think Miles makes a serious move on Nemo in this seventh chapter called Scaring Fish Now, what do you think about it?

I curse in my stories, I haven't noticed anyone else practising censorship on them but me, myself and I. If I think my story has too much "questionable" language , I might consider a warning in the chapter note, but I haven't seen that nessesary yet. I think the rules in chat and forums and blogs are slightly different with stories maybe? Artistic freedom or something? I might be wrong... wonder if some rule has gone pass me...

Finally I dot started! Poor River, I feel sorry for him. I wonder if Silver is beyond help? Or are the options for Silver different than what River wants for him. Maybe Silver needs something River can't give to him. What about that sexual position? The only way I saw it possible (I tried even drawing it...) was: A) They had no spine Their spines were made of rubber C) River had a donkie the size of hulabaloora You got me pulled in again to the world of Silver.

What would you do if I said my abilities are illegal?

**kicks the Universe for torturing my Nephy** I hate that things happen always the hard way. I know how that feels... You seem to be spiralling now, but remember that you can only get up from there. I wish I could be there to help you with all this shit.

The Red Haired Boy, chapter six of Sign for Me is out now. Who do you guys like better for Nemo? Miles, the cute red head or the blue haired teen sex god Dion?

You really can write from the heart! This was an emotional read and made me think about what we are ready to give up to secure the happines of the one we love. Life is a risk, no one gets through it without scars. Coop needs to get it. The ending kiss was prrrfect, I'm sure Seb would agree M Ps. I miss the endlessly witty dialogue of Cooper and where is his best girlfriend?

Do you take apprentices

No pink, nooooo.... jk I'm happy to hear that things are going well and into the right direction --> a baby flicka I'm sure the momma will know her rightful place and do as you have all agreed and signed to do. If not... *** Try not to stress about it since there is not much more you can do. You'll be such handsome groom I bet Mike will be too Joyful waiting!

Cooper is really going wild I'm interested in Sebastian Gimme gimme gimme more of him!

LOL Don't worry. It took me three months to figure out how to navigate here and get cosy. Now that I feel I know all the dark corners of this site too I'm happy with all features. I use most of them and find them easy to work with. You can always ask around how this and that works just like ceelow did with the author status question in this thread. Feel free to pull my sleeve if you need any help If I don't know how to help, I can always point you to the direction than can do it better. Enjoy the site! Give it time, take it as an adventure

CONGRATS JIAN! I'm really really happy for you! You deserve this with all of your wonderful stories and you shiny and helpful personality. You are the best! Luv, Twin (the evil one) Ps. Enjoy the cake

I see it like this: there is the review section to give supportive and maybe light reviews. There you can point out a what ever comes to your mind directly after reading. There you can let the author now in general what you thought about the story and how you felt after reading it. Sending personal messages to the authors is something I'd also do, especially if you want to give/get specific criticism. It is always nice to ask if they want it though. I love interacting with other authors. In public reviews I seldomly leave negative comment's but I think I can see some good points every single story I have read. I have no need to put myself above others and try to find the holes in the stories. If I don't like them, I just generally move on fast and read something else. If the author has put their heart and soul in to the story, I appreciate it. I never read stories written by people I dislike. That is my choice. I would never leave a neg comment because of my personal feelings about the author, so I just rather skip the story. I feel it is ridiculous to put oneself above others and comment from high up there that some story doesn't deserve a) the amount of reviews b) the positive reviews c) the rep points d) the hype... I'd say everyone feel free to WRITE, READ and COMMENT, instead of scrutinizing other peoples actions. I think being polite has nothing to do with sucking up with people. Being nice has nothing to do with lying. Being active and supportive to your friends is not away from others. There is a line between constructive criticism and negative criticism. Respect and be respected. I would not want to see GA turning into this competitive dog eat dog world. With this said, I still personally would love the honest feedback. It just shows that the reader has actually read the story, focussed on it and wants to offer the author advice. I'm thankful of the feedback I get, I try to get learn from it even if I don't always agree with it. Via PM I have gotten a few pretty honest feedback that did not praise my work, but were left with thoughtful insight, humour and support. I treasure them most. The biggest truth came from Collan: all authors take feedback differently. Some never see any flaws in their own work. The fact just is that not everyone can be pleased - not the authors or the readers.