Marzipan
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I love this poem. It touched my hear in so many levels. Thank you for sharing babe.
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I'm so scared of spiders even when they are not poisonous. But they are part of the nature, so what can we do? My thoughts are with Dustin. Get well.
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Oooohhhh. I like Bella even better! Such a tender name for such a psyco. And she does everyting with a sweet smile on her face. At least in my images. Argh. Not a good idea to read this while in bed I'll have nightmares if I won't comtinue and if I do continue I won't get any sleep at all. Neph you are a devil
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Happy birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Please don't neg other people's opinions
Marzipan commented on W_L's blog entry in Life is worth an entry
Neg reps suck. I agree with Yang, I have only used a neg rep once and it was on someone who was way out of line. I also reprted the member and that is in my opinnion a better way to deal with the offencive types. Why we need the neg reps? Gods forbid when they are used on a story... When I see that it makes me so sad. When I see a unfair negs I always try to balance it with a happy point. Everyone is entitled to their opinnion, you are so right about that! Would be boring if we all thought the same about everything. I would not wanna live in a world like that. It is about respect of the difference of the opinnion. Someone might just be on a power trip with the neg reps -
I would have thought theyd have a deep convo BEFORE they go to bed again after the first time But that hot *blush*
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I feel sorry for Frank. Deep down he cares about Max and... Josh, but isn't man enough to stand behind it yet. What a devious plan Josh cooked up, teheee! And how it backfired - sorta - and probably went furter than he had planned. It felt realistic between two hormonal teenagers
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What a two face this Frank guy is. I hope he is like this just for being immature and just unconfidant for himself and will rise to the oaccation when needed. He won't turn out to be a bad guy? *sigh* I'm having much fun with the blossoming romance here... and the fact that you are serving this rose with spikes in it makes it enjoyable read. Thank you!
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I'd just die if I was in Josh's shoes there waiting, hoping, threading... And the poor boy sleep talking hehehe. My favourite chappy so far.
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Way to go Max! I was wondering how it would have been possible for Josh and Frank not hear about the rumour when eveyone else did... I like the whole consept of this story so far, I am though slightly lost at times with the pov, but only momentarily. Is it settled that you start the chappy with Max' and end with Josh's.
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I hate Mr Fleet, grrr... What happened in Chicgo???? **reads on**
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So, Max and Josh I think this was a really interesting start and introduction to the lead characters. I will read on and give you my mind later.
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This Siona is scary! The first female villain in long time I have read (Renee has one in her vamp story ) ! How is he gonna make Jayden talk? Give him truth serum? Threaten him? Darn. Hmm. Also I liked how one of the things Jayden remembered was the feeling of closeness to the rest of the band after the consert - even when he is some kind of a lone wolf within the pack. I like that there is so much action and mystery wrapped together from the start.
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I'm beyond happy for you both, Blueberry and Frog . **hug**
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Nice introduction to the band and Jayden I think you portraid them all so well and I'm looking forward to see what happens next! Darn, I hate to leave the read for tonight in a cliff. Whyyy did you put a cliff in the first chapter?? **Is gonna dream of the band**
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A small break from the writing did good for me. Does it count a block when I wrote poems? Well, now I'm bursting with ideas and words Happy writings to all!
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Raku, it won't be a dual and sorry Cailen, but I'm gonna root for Zolia Lily. :2thumbs: She entered the this Unsanctioned Contest with her story, but I think missed to put a link here or PM you... You can check her via PM if needed, I'm sure And here's a link to Lily's story: Luke and Caleb's Bad Beginning I promise Raku, it will blow your mind
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Hello Raku I'm entering this with a story called Sign for Me It will be about 15k, and I'll try to post 1-2 times a week.
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Young rebellion! Oh dear I much enjoyed this Soo French... I miss France.
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I'm so happy happy happy for you guys. Hugs and kisses. You deserve this, both of you **dances**
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It is not a bad choice you are making. Internet can seem like a harmless place so there is always place for discussion about the idendity safety policy and trust among peers. I don't mind having GA connections that stay anonymous, they can still be meaningful.
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My favourite line was from Will: “I’d rather have this single moment with you than a life-long relationship with anybody.” It was a surprise to me that the protagonist wasn't actually only making a choise between old and new love, he was actually battling with his own emotions and trusting in them. That made this story so much more deeper. And I love the way love can just walk/run or what ever to your life. Life is so full of surprises that one never knows what can happen next. Now, this wasn't a cheery story, but it felt real. The ending was good. It didn't need any more tighting up.
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O_o I asked something cheery to read from Jian. It is Friday today. He suggested this. He has twisted sense of humor. I will kill him now. Well as a story, I loved it. The first part was heart warming and so cosy. The last part filled fith anguish and sorrow. Thank you Anyta again for the story. It brought me up, then down but left me with hope.
